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Please don't take Henderson's powers away. I really like him super. And have a great trip to Hawaii. Enjoy your new grandson. gerry
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Oh yes, you have to let Bill keep the powers -- I like the idea of a Metropolis with three super-heros <g> And Sue went to all that trouble about dreaming up a costume, too. I confess, I'm curious about Sue meeting L&C, especially Lois... maybe they can have them over for dinner and Lois can give tips on the finer points of being married to a superman Or if that doesn't fit in your story (since there's only one more part), I'll just imagine it <g> Or, of course, I could just wait for the inevitable sequel PJ
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Nan Another excellent part! I also hope that Henderson keeps his powers. Sue and his costume, LOL! Tricia
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Hi, Great part. More soon, please. MAF
Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF
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Wonderful part Nan! Have a great trip! Enjoy your family time! ~Liz
Lois: Can I go? Clark: No. Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go. Clark: Then why do you ask? Lois: I’m trying to be nice.
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things come in threes!(superheroes too)
booo............only 1 more part.
That must mean........there's a sequel
(It's ok, you can start writing it AFTER you come back from Hawaii...have a great time)
Chris
"Together we are stronger than each of us is apart"
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Good instalment, Nan.
It's been fun to see Henderson handle this life altering situation so matter of factly. His 'nothing seems to trouble him' nature sure came in handy.
I may be in the minority, but, while I find it fun to see Henderson (and Lois) becoming super for a time, I don't want to see it last forever. Part of the mystique of Superman is that he's a 'one of a kind' super hero. He's the original and like a xerox, it's never quite as good as the original.
Tank (who thinks that being super takes too much of the challenge out of Lois' life)
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Yay! One more part!! Is this going to be the start of a new series? have fun in Hawaii!!
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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Dang, only one more part...must mean there is a sequal in the works... Part of me agrees with Tank and part of me agrees with the rest, with regard to the permancy of the super-powers. Maybe you could wait several stories before they lose them... James
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Loved it, Nan! I can't believe you're ending it so soon; I want to see much more interaction between the three of them. You've shown us them interacting in their superhero guises, but I want to see them interacting as Lois, Clark and Bill now (and possibly Sue ) since Bill does know who they are. And, actually, I still want to see Lois and Clark dealing with the fact that Bill knows Superman's identity now. Only one more part?? Wendy
Just a fly-by! *waves*
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