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Grat part 
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Columnist
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:You've left yourself open for a sequel and Henderson becomes the Black Knight. What a triumverate Metropolis has now. Have a great trip and hurry home. You have lots more writing to do. Gerry
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Top Banana
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Nice ending!! I'm thrilled about the possiblities for sequels!! Loved it Nan! ~Liz
Lois: Can I go?
Clark: No.
Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go.
Clark: Then why do you ask?
Lois: I’m trying to be nice.
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Pulitzer
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Hi, Great story.  Where is the sequel? 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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I'm so sad this story is over... but it was a very fun ride  Have a great trip to Hawaii and then come back to keep cranking out the great fic!  PJ
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Pulitzer
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Nan A great wrap-up! I thoroughly enjoyed it. Tricia 
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Kerth
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Ooh!!
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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This was a fun ride! For my tastes, it ended a little abruptly, but that, as others pointed out, happily leaves an opening for sequels.  Thanks again for the story.
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Interesting little ride.
We all know that Nan is incapable of writing a story without at least two or three sequels to it.
Some interesting things yet to see. The Henderson, Sue dynamic is fun, but does allow for some nice wham potential.
I also think that the relationships between Lois, Clark, and Bill, are at the moment, too matter of fact, and formal. There's room for some more complicated involvement there also.
So, I guess we just have to wait for part 2 (and 3, and 4, and 5, and...)
Tank (who wonders if there is a name for a disease where a person feels compelled to write series)
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Very cool!!! I love the Henderson in Tights.. and I love the way that he interacts with his wife and I want to see more of this particular universe Anytime that you feel inspired of course 
Marns
~pobody's nerfect
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Pulitzer
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Nan, I sure hope you're planning a sequel! There's so much more I want to see - Lois and Clark actually dealing with the fact that Bill knows who Superman and UltraWoman are; the three Superheroes getting to know each other better; Bill feeling guilty about keeping a pretty big secret from Sue - and so on. I loved this premise right from the start. Henderson is one of my very favourite supporting characters, and I really hope that you do more with him and his powers. Hey, how about a spin-off series? You and Yvonne could even collaborate and give us George and Bill: the New Adventures of Supercop! Wendy
Just a fly-by! *waves*
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Pulitzer
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As always, a superb job.
And I am looking forward to the Sue and Lois interaction.
James
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Great story  I confess, I never really thought about Henderson as a character before. Since I read your story and rewatched the episodes in which he appears, though, I've become quite a fan  I'll be here to read, if you decide to write a sequel Julia
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