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FDK-Twins: 2/? #13243 06/17/04 02:30 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast daneel OP Kerth
OP daneel Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast	Good idea Clark! "Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot

Re: FDK-Twins: 2/? #13244 06/17/04 05:17 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,047 NJ Supes1fan Top Banana
Supes1fan Top Banana Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,047 NJ	Another great part..Lois is on the case! More soon please! ~Liz Lois: Can I go? Clark: No. Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go. Clark: Then why do you ask? Lois: I’m trying to be nice.

Re: FDK-Twins: 2/? #13245 06/17/04 05:19 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,454 London (the one in Ontario, Ca... Wendymr Pulitzer
Wendymr Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,454 London (the one in Ontario, Ca...	YAY!! Another of Nan's season 1 adaptations! This is terrific so far. I had to remind myself of the way Pheremone, More Likely left their relationship, since more recently I've been reading the 'Charlie' series from you - but I pretty soon figured out that it's still pre-revelation. Though judging by what you've shown us so far, I have a sneaking suspicion that Lois may start to put things together... You're giving us a classic Lois in pursuit of an investigation - she's asking some great questions about Superman, in a way she rarely did in the series after her initial searches for him. And I like Clark's resolve to ask her for help with the impostor, too. This is shaping up to be very entertaining. More soon! Wendy Just a fly-by! waves

Re: FDK-Twins: 2/? #13246 06/17/04 06:36 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,644 North Carolina, USA C ChiefPam Pulitzer
ChiefPam Pulitzer C Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,644 North Carolina, USA	Yes, what Wendy said... and I also appreciated the humor in this section. The visual of Clark walking on the ceiling, his tie flopping into his face, was just priceless. Then there's this throw-away line about Lois... Quote The whiff of smoke from her kitchen reminded her that she had been cooking dinner. Write more -- plot, humor, revelation or not, whatever, just write more! PJ

Re: FDK-Twins: 2/? #13247 06/17/04 07:53 AM
Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,269 Connecticut ChaaBreh Top Banana
ChaaBreh Top Banana Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,269 Connecticut	Lois on the case! Yes Looking forward to #3. SOON Chris "Together we are stronger than each of us is apart"

Re: FDK-Twins: 2/? #13248 06/17/04 08:07 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great part. Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK-Twins: 2/? #13249 06/17/04 10:17 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,999 The edge of civilization, Minn... T Tank Merriwether
Tank Merriwether T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,999 The edge of civilization, Minn...	Nice depiction of the relationship. Their comfort level together is solid. Good set up for Superman to 'include' Lois into his investigation (and I suppose that would include Clark as well). It should be fun to see Lois working past her 'infatuation reactions' in order to be of some real help to the Man of Steel. Looking forward to more... quickly. Tank (who is a little bothered by the computer screen since his eyes are still dialated from his trip to the eye doctor... yes! he can still see... sort of)

Re: FDK-Twins: 2/? #13250 06/17/04 03:06 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,627 Gulf Shores, AL Shadow Pulitzer
Shadow Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,627 Gulf Shores, AL	Great part. I love how comfortable Lois feels by just showing up and hanging out at his home when he turned out not to be there. More! Jen "Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy

Re: FDK-Twins: 2/? #13251 06/17/04 09:10 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia T TriciaW Pulitzer
TriciaW Pulitzer T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia	Nan A wonderful part! Tricia

Re: FDK-Twins: 2/? #13252 06/18/04 04:33 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 89 LaurieD Freelance Reporter
LaurieD Freelance Reporter Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 89	Nan, Great start to what promises to be a wonderful story. I'm hooked. I hope you can post more soon. I love the Lois/Clark relationship. Lois seems likely to uncover some "great truths". I hope so, anyway. Happy to be hooked on a story. RL's been too stressful. LaurieD

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