Nan,
Sorry it has taken me so long to post feedback to your story.
I think you are *such* a good writer; I just love everything of yours I've ever read. This is no exception!
This is a very interesting premise. I can already see the cogs in Lois' brain turning. I wonder how long it will take her to put 2 and 2 together? Clark has already told her way to much... (or not enough! lol)
Looking forward to Part 4!
- Vicki