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Woo-hoo, way to go, Lois! I knew it was only a matter of time til she put all the pieces together, but I love the way you did it, hiding it within a different kind of important event... and we're gonna have Lois knowing Clark is Superman without Clark knowing she knows... love that kinda story  Everything else was good, too <g> More, more! PJ
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Hi, Great part. 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
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Splendid revelation. And Lois reaction is certainly original, too: Her first impulse to say something to him died almost before it was born. Something didn't make sense here, and for just this once she wasn't going to jump in without checking the water level. He couldn't know what she had suddenly realized. Until she figured out exactly what was going on here, it was probably better to say nothing, but once she did, Clark Kent had better have a good explanation, or he was going to be toast.
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 Boo-Yah! This story's getting *GOOD!*
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Another great post. Ditto the above responders.
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Okay, so the Superclone is somewhat crude, coarse, and a bully. It's lucky that Metropolis has him, because if Clark doesn't have the right answers to the upcoming interrogation. Lois will kill him.
Tank (who hopes this clone melts away soon)
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What a nice twist to the Vatman story....a revelation based on Clark's (close!) resemblance to Superman!!!
I can't wait for the next installment now!
Chris
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Nan A great part!  Tricia 
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Finally! A Vatman revelation!  Jose
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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Nan!! Ooh yey! Ditto to what Pam said. You have us all even more riveted now. Yanking the belt tight, she fumbled with the array of locks, not stopping to wonder how so many had been fastened, since the last thing she recalled was crawling under the covers, leaving Clark to let himself out.  Though Perry wouldn't take bribes...maybe there's a Perry clone too. More soon, Nan! Sara
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