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Hi,

Great part.

MAF

Alicia

This part is excellent.

I can sense Clark's surprise at the solution to their problem. You did a wonderful job portraying everyone's emotions.
There are some lovely moments! Very WAFFy!

The ending is perfect. And I can tell that a strong friendship has developed between the couples.
Disguises, ROTFL!! Surely Wells didn't think that they fall for that again!

Tricia

I haven't commented on this story as it's been posted because I hadn't read it until now. I just finished it and have to say very well done. I like the fertility explanation. And I've always thought the answer to the Kryptonit problem was completely as simple as that! Thanks for writing and sharing with us.

Yes, Alicia, I'd definitely like to read a prequel! I like your Dr. Clark and Dr. Lois too

Congratulations on a great LC Fanfic!

Hi,

Me too, me too.

MAF

Ditto for me!

I wouldn't mind also seeing a story where Lois and Clark visit the Drs. Kent. Poor Clark. He never gets to go anywhere.

Hi Alicia,

Sorry I haven't been commenting along the way -- there just hasn't been time for me.

I've enjoyed this story very much, and I hope that you're going to be doing more writing in the future.

Yours Jenni

Oh my god, I hate you. Or, rather, I'm *going* to hate you when I have to get up for work in three hours. Yes, that's right, three hours. What am I doing up at (check the timestamp, that's right) FOUR AM after I specifically told you two hours ago that I was going to bed and I'd see you tomorrow? Simple, this is how it happened:

Annie: Good night, Alicia.

Annie logs off.

Annie suddenly remembers that Alicia has finally finished the medical miracles story. Remembers that all story parts are sitting in her inbox, available offline. Decides to read *one* installment as a bed time story.

....two hours later.....

Annie finishes story, still completely enthralled. Looks at clock, horrified, then decided to log on and give feedback anyway.


So, you'll have to forgive me if my fdk is brief, but it's WAY past my bedtime. All I can say for now is that I loved it. I adore the idea of the alternate universe where Lois and Clark are doctors. The explanation that they chose the profession because the other one did, was perfect. It's so true. Whatever profession they chose, I can only imagine them doing it together. Their partnership is a huge part of their relationship. Also, the part about Wells not letting Lois hold her baby because it would rob her of one of the most precious moments of her life was priceless. I have a barely-begun time travel story sitting on my harddrive that is worlds apart from this one, but still has that concept in it. I also have to say that you nailed the two Loises interaction. I've never really thought about it before, but of course they would be natural rivals. They part where they listed their numerous accolades had me cracking up. You did a great job of making something totally foreign to me (and to most readers, probably) interesting and captivating. If you'd have asked me a week ago if I'd have read eagerly to find the chemical formula for something, I'd have laughed at you. We both know I have no knowledge of or inclination toward anything scientific. But you reeled me in immediately. I was desperate to find out how their problem would me solved. I absolutely loved it.

There were a couple of minor things that I caught throughout that could stand a little tweaking, but I'm going to go back and read the other comment folders and make sure no one else has pointed them out before I bother you with them. If no one else has, I'll shoot you an email with them.

But overall, this was a great story, and I had a wonderful time reading it, even if I cheat myself out of being well rested at work tomorrow.

Annie

Alicia
great part
wonderful story - I loved it
Yes on the prequel
merry

I think a prequel would be a good idea, too.

Nan

Alicia, YAAYYY! You finished it!

I've been away for a couple of days and the whole world seems to have been posting fic instalments in that time, including a new fic from Rac!! So this will, unfortunately, be brief.

Great story! A really unusual take on the Family Hour cliffhanger, too, and I like your Drs Lois and Clark. So if you want to write about them too, go ahead! I'll be reading.

It's great to see you back in the land of Lois and Clark ficdom, Alicia. MORE!!

Prequel! Prequel!

Great finale to a fantastic story, Alicia.

Lots of humour and anguish and fun and despair and hope in this.

Good job!

Irene

Great work, Alicia!



I totally agree with the idea of a prequel and I 'm looking forward to reading it.

See you soon.

AnnaBtG.

Loved your story and your way of solving Clark's problem.

YESSS

We'd love more about the doctors, especially how they got together

Oh, whoops, I completely forgot to respond to this thread. Stupid RL getting in the way again.

I want to thank everyone who has read this story and has posted feedback at any point in the story. Everyone's comments have been so uplifting and always made me smile . I get easily discouraged, so I am really, really glad that people liked the story. I also really want to thank Tricia for BRing it for me - she was absolutely incredible .

Okay, due to popular demand I am definately going to write the prequel story about how the Drs. Lois and Clark meet and get together. I might also write a sequel to Medical Miracles set in our universe where Lois and Clark try to tell Dr. Klein about their findings. However, it might not be too soon in comming because I am really hoping to finish my master's degree research by the beginning of July and defend by the end of July and then graduate in August . But the rest of this summer is going to be pretty intense so I am not sure when I am going to have a good chance to write.

Thank you, thank you, thank you to everyone that commented on the rest of the story and especially to everyone that commented on this part: Maria, Tricia, SQD, Ursie, me, Jenni, Annie, Merry, Nan, Wendy, Irene, Anna, and Trenna .

And Annie, if you want to show me the time travel problems, I am all ears .

- Alicia
(who hates Case Western Reserve University very, very much at the moment for how they totally screwed her over )

Just finshed this story and found it entertaining.

I would never have come up with the solution you did. It was quite creative.

Yes, I would love to see both a prequal and a sequal to this.

James