Ooooh. Hot sizzling kiss! I love it. If she doesn't like him, why is she only there to watch the stand? I love that it only took to the second night for Lois to cough up a buck. Hmmmmm. Will she go back again?
I love her getting jealous by all the young girls swooning over him, and he's oblivious.
Perfectly in character. A fun read. Can't wait to see where it goes next? Oh, wait. I've got to wait until tomorrow. Darn.
Well, I really should be working on my FDK anyway.