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FDK: Mr Right or Mr 'Right Now' (Smallville) 2/8 #253824 05/08/14 11:37 AM
Joined: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,020 England KatherineKent OP Top Banana
OP KatherineKent Top Banana Joined: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,020 England	Comments go here. So, did you enjoy Lois' dream? KatherineKent/Victoria Lois: "You put up with me for the same reason I put up with you. It's because I'm completely in love with you." Clark: "And I love you ... Did we just make up?" Lois: "I think so."

Re: FDK: Mr Right or Mr 'Right Now' (Smallville) 2/8 KatherineKent #253831 05/08/14 12:02 PM
Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner
VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	Hot! Hot! Hot! You've got Lois's voice down pat. I can hear her speaking your lines. Great job! I love that her thoughts of him are keeping her up. She tries to think of the blur, but how can you dream about someone you've technically never really seen? I love that she knows the truth in her dreams but doesn't believe it. VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK: Mr Right or Mr 'Right Now' (Smallville) 2/8 KatherineKent #253836 05/08/14 02:05 PM
Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 1,200 Boston, MA mozartmaid Top Banana
mozartmaid Top Banana Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 1,200 Boston, MA	Quote Her dreams were of Red and Blue, but it wasn’t the Red-Blue Blur. It was red and blue checked shirts. I love it when Lois fantasizes about the Blur and somehow it ends up being Clark she's thinking of... Quote “I’m right here Lois,” came the voice at her ear again. No this is supposed to be the Blur. “But I am the Blur, Lois.” No, that would just be too perfect. My life isn’t so perfect. Things don’t go so easy for me. Besides if it’s true then there is no Mr Right cause the Blur just has all Clark’s relationship baggage. The truth is staring her right in the face, and she just can't see it! Well-written bit here. Quote “I know you like to wear it, Lois.” His voice was still a whisper. “You can put it on if you want.” All the time he spoke he was dipping his head slowly. Now she was pinned against the kitchen table. She slid her hands over his shoulders and linked them behind his neck. His lips tasted sweet, like vanilla. “Mmmm. Wild Cherry.” Clark mumbled against her lips. Nice dream here... I could see this being Red K Clark... but without K -- wowza! Quote If he was ever to act like that for real, rather than just stare at me with that ‘take me’ look, God help me. I'm right with you, Lois. Such a fun fic! Can't wait for more! (and there totally needs to be a nfic version... ) Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way.

Re: FDK: Mr Right or Mr 'Right Now' (Smallville) 2/8 mozartmaid #253857 05/09/14 06:51 AM
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Ultra Woman Pulitzer Joined: Aug 2004 Posts: 2,591 Likes: 11 Brazil - RS	Wow! Smoking hot! It's funny how Lois always mocked Clark's shirts but she loved to wear them every chance she'd get. Originally Posted by mozartmaid (and there totally needs to be a nfic version... ) I agree! Andreia

Re: FDK: Mr Right or Mr 'Right Now' (Smallville) 2/8 VirginiaR #253971 05/11/14 03:34 PM
Joined: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,020 England KatherineKent OP Top Banana
OP KatherineKent Top Banana Joined: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,020 England	Originally Posted by VirginiaR Hot! Hot! Hot! You've got Lois's voice down pat. I can hear her speaking your lines. Great job! I love that her thoughts of him are keeping her up. She tries to think of the blur, but how can you dream about someone you've technically never really seen? I love that she knows the truth in her dreams but doesn't believe it. Does she know the truth? Is her subconscious trying to tell her something? Ot is she just fantasizing, (like most women do) that her boyfriend/hubby is also Superman? Originally Posted by mozartmaid I love it when Lois fantasizes about the Blur and somehow it ends up being Clark she's thinking of... Quote Quote “I know you like to wear it, Lois.” His voice was still a whisper. “You can put it on if you want.” All the time he spoke he was dipping his head slowly. Now she was pinned against the kitchen table. She slid her hands over his shoulders and linked them behind his neck. His lips tasted sweet, like vanilla. “Mmmm. Wild Cherry.” Clark mumbled against her lips. Nice dream here... I could see this being Red K Clark... but without K -- wowza! Red K Clark (when he hasn't reached the limit of 'criminal') is sooo sexy. Quote Such a fun fic! Can't wait for more! hyper (and there totally needs to be a nfic version... ) LOL. This is the n-fic version ... although it never really gets quite hot enough to move to the n-fic forum, but it pushes the boundaries a bit! Originally Posted by Ultra Woman Wow! Smoking hot! Thanks Quote It's funny how Lois always mocked Clark's shirts but she loved to wear them every chance she'd get. I love pictures of Lois wearing Clark's shirts. The first time she did it ... it's like she's branding herself as Clark's property. sigh And when she wears his football jersey ... it even has the name Kent on the back. It's like she's declaring to the world who she belongs to! Quote Originally Posted by mozartmaid (and there totally needs to be a nfic version... ) I agree! Andreia Hopefully what I post will be good enough for you. KatherineKent/Victoria Lois: "You put up with me for the same reason I put up with you. It's because I'm completely in love with you." Clark: "And I love you ... Did we just make up?" Lois: "I think so."

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