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FDK: Mr Right or Mr 'Right Now' (Smallville) 5/8 #254230 05/16/14 02:12 PM
Joined: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,020 England KatherineKent OP Top Banana
OP KatherineKent Top Banana Joined: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,020 England	Keep the comments coming please. KatherineKent/Victoria Lois: "You put up with me for the same reason I put up with you. It's because I'm completely in love with you." Clark: "And I love you ... Did we just make up?" Lois: "I think so."

Re: FDK: Mr Right or Mr 'Right Now' (Smallville) 5/8 KatherineKent #254233 05/16/14 02:31 PM
Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner
VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	Talk about what, Clark? You're the one who ALMOST kissed her and walked away with an empty excuse? You did realize it was the same thing you did when Lana returned during Chloe's wedding, right? What has Lois done? Stared at you from on the other side of one way glass? Accidentally poured coffee on you? (Good thing you didn't think to get her hot coffee, Clark, otherwise you could have been seriously scalded across that perfect chest of yours.) I can see why Lois wants to keep him at arm's length. He owes her big time for repeating the almost kiss and dash from Chloe's wedding. But I'm not seeing exactly what he has to complain about. Quote “Lois, I think we should go on a real date.” He spoke softly. Yea! Clark! good way to step up to the plate. Quote She was numb with shock. Dating? Real dating? “You don’t have to give me an answer right now ...” he continued but the words brought her out of the shock. Mr Right Now. Remember, he’s Mr Right Now, not Mr Right. LOis! Really? You've got him right where you want him. There's no rule that states that Mr. Right Now can't turn into Mr. Right Forever. Quote “Um, I think I should change this shirt.” Lois nodded mutely. “Luckily I actually have a spare in my drawer.” He separated himself from her slowly and she watched him walk away. This paragraph confused me, because it didn't have a dialogue tag, only Lois's actions. Therefore, I thought Lois had been the one speaking. And I was like, did Lois get coffee on her shirt too? I'm curious what Clark thinks they need to talk about. /rubs hands together with anticipation./ VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK: Mr Right or Mr 'Right Now' (Smallville) 5/8 KatherineKent #254314 05/18/14 04:34 AM
Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 1,200 Boston, MA mozartmaid Top Banana
mozartmaid Top Banana Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 1,200 Boston, MA	Quote Lois was at her private pleasure spot again.... Resting her chin on her hand, leant on top of the copier, she’d given up all pretence of copying this afternoon. Yes! I can TOTALLY see this as Lois' favorite place to ogle Clark in private! Quote She continued to stare as Clark placed the donut back down and strolled round to her side of the desks, searching through her papers for some corroborating quote ... or something. Hmmm... what's Clark up to, I wonder? Quote I can’t believe he did it again. But, more than that, I can’t believe I did it again. Stupid, stupid, stupid Lois. How many times did you tell yourself not to fall for Mr Right Now? Awww... poor Lois. Quote She stopped and looked at her hands, splayed over his chest. God, I love his chest. I could just explore that chest all day Sigh Don't we all? Quote “Lois, we are going to talk about this. Right now.” Oooh! This is gonna be good! Can't wait for the next part! Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way.

Re: FDK: Mr Right or Mr 'Right Now' (Smallville) 5/8 mozartmaid #254340 05/18/14 04:07 PM
Joined: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,020 England KatherineKent OP Top Banana
OP KatherineKent Top Banana Joined: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,020 England	Originally Posted by VirginiaR Talk about what, Clark? You're the one who ALMOST kissed her and walked away with an empty excuse? Talk about the way Lois was eating his chest up with her eyes .... that's what they need to talk about. Quote You did realize it was the same thing you did when Lana returned during Chloe's wedding, right? Um, yes. It was exactly the same thing as the wedding. Ooops. Quote LOis! Really? You've got him right where you want him. There's no rule that states that Mr. Right Now can't turn into Mr. Right Forever. Of course not. She'll figure it out ... soon enough. Quote Quote “Um, I think I should change this shirt.” Lois nodded mutely. “Luckily I actually have a spare in my drawer.” He separated himself from her slowly and she watched him walk away. This paragraph confused me, because it didn't have a dialogue tag, only Lois's actions. Therefore, I thought Lois had been the one speaking. And I was like, did Lois get coffee on her shirt too? Ahh. Maybe a little adjustment needed there. It is Clark speaking, but Lois nodding at what he's saying. Quote I'm curious what Clark thinks they need to talk about. /rubs hands together with anticipation./ As I said at the top. They need to talk about the donut that Lois wants to eat .. uh .. Originally Posted by mozartmaid Yes! I can TOTALLY see this as Lois' favorite place to ogle Clark in private! Thanks. Quote Quote She stopped and looked at her hands, splayed over his chest. God, I love his chest. I could just explore that chest all day Sigh Don't we all? Oh good. I thought I was the only one. Quote Quote “Lois, we are going to talk about this. Right now.” Oooh! This is gonna be good! Can't wait for the next part! Just wait till you read it ... you'll be after the NEXT part then!!! KatherineKent/Victoria Lois: "You put up with me for the same reason I put up with you. It's because I'm completely in love with you." Clark: "And I love you ... Did we just make up?" Lois: "I think so."

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