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So. Clark said they were going to talk about their ... situation ...

Talk!!!! What talk?

I like that kind of 'talk!' Um, but careful... this might get moved to the nfic section, just warning ya.

OK, I get Clark is in a haze of passion at the moment, but seriously?? He really had to bring up LANA now, of all moments?

But thanks for writing out all our little fantasies! There totally needed to be a make-out scene in the copy room...

Ooooh. *That* kind of talk. Fun in the store... er... copier room. . My, oh, my. Is that a hot flash? No, just KK's story.

Go going, Clark. Open mouth insert your ex-girlfriend. What a mood killer.

And, Of course, Clark is going to misinterpret her running off. And, if not, how is he going to convince Lois he's serious. Can Chloe or Oliver please slap him upon the back of the head for his faux pas?

I do agree with Lois that things were moving too quickly, especially in a place where someone could walk in at any moment. The first time shouldn't be in such a place.... later on... on other hand feel free to come back here.

Where will they go from here?

Thanks. I've done a little editing. I actually made a few adjustments before posting earlier ... but I have been back through it again now.


Yup. He did. He mentioned Lana while getting all hot a steamy with Lois. Maybe you'll understand a little better after the next chapter.


Totally did need it!





Yup. *nods* Everyone groans and shouts at Clark at this point. It got the exact same reaction when I originally posted it on Ksite three years ago.


I know it was getting hot ... but even if Clark hadn't mentioned ... her ... name I don't think it would have gone quite that far!!!!

Next chapter is the one all from Clark's POV. You'll get to see what he's been going through.

After so much sexual tension between them the dam had to break! The scene in the copier room was beyond hot! But just then Clark had to bring up the kill-mood-ex-girlfriend! He should have kept his mouth busy otherwise.

Now, how is Mr. Foot-in-the-Mouth going to get them on the right path again?

Please! Post the whole version on the nfic forum! This story is too hot to smooth it down! It sure deserves a nfic version!

Andreia

Thanks.





He's got some explaining ... and grovelling to do.


Believe me, the difference is actually minor. About 4 or 5 sentences and some more specific words used, rather than vague references. It's not worth an n-fic version.