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So. You've seen Clark's POV to the last few chapters. Is he forgiven for blurting out the worst possible name at the worst possible moment when he was with Lois in the copy room, or not?

Can he rectify this situation?

I suppose we can forgive him, if we must.

I liked this statement a lot... points out being strong where it counts, not just how much he can bench press.

Go after her, Clark! Can't wait to read the final part!!

His absolution depends on what he is going to do to fix it. I imagine it'll take a lot of begging and groveling to get in Lois's good graces again. I hope he has a very good apology in mind. He'll need to be very convincing to make up for his horrible faux pas.

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Awwww. It's love. So, he then tackles her in the copier room and mentions his ex. Good going there, Smallville.

Wow. I've never heard him gripe about his "Blur" duties before. And, yes, they were inconvenient. LOL.

So, it was the making out with Lois which made him realize this? And, yes, she definitely was stronger than Lana. Lois was sunshine, Lana was rain. Lois was passion, Lana was pain. Lois was his future, Lana was his past. Perhaps Clark was a bit too relaxed if he didn't realize that he spoke his thoughts regarding Lana out loud. Maybe he needs another session with Jor-El on control.

The fact that Clark brought up Lana's name at all proves Lois's theory correct. He hasn't had enough distance between the two relationships.

Yea! He's going after her! I hope he finds her, but I don't want groveling. I want convincing. She needs someone as strong as she is. A good solid relationship needs a good foundation, so he needs to find the stones to do it.

Phew, good. I'm glad to hear it.


Hope you enjoy it.


Well, hopefully you'll be happy with the next part and the conversation between Lois and Clark. It's not particularly long, or angsty, or even full of apologies, but they are honest with each other, and express their feelings very simply.


LOL. Yup.

But, remember, its not ONLY love. Even though he's realised that he loves her, there is still mountain of sexual tension. Still, mentioning the ex was not a good thing, even though he meant it to be a compliment.

So, it was the making out with Lois which made him realize this?[/quote]

Yes. Making out was what brought about his revelation ... It was more of a ... 'final piece of the puzzle' though, rather than the only piece of the puzzle.


Well said. The difference between the two women is so obvious. It's actually one of the reasons why he DID speak it out loud. He never thought he'd have a relationship where he could be himself, where he could let go of his strength/control. To realise that he could ... he needed to let Lois know that she was the one. But of course his mind was fuzzy. No idea why. And his explanation was no-where near understandable enough for Lois.


Nope. He was making it clear how Lana was not right for him, and he now knows that Lois IS right for him. Actually it was showing that he WAS over Lana.


He's off to look for her ... but if you read the next chapter you'll realise that, in the few minutes since she left ... *sigh* ... she's already got herself in trouble.

Thankfully, someone will be there to rescue her.