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Yes!! The part I have been waiting for . Well for sure when she does go back (if she goes back) she will have a much different opinion of Clark, Cat, and probably Lex. She is beginning to get suspicious of Lex due to the Miranda incident. One thing I suspect is that she will not be getting run at by Lex in this story. Lex is too vain to be seen escorting a pregnant(by someone else) woman around .

Dandello, you are covering a lot of ground quickly. I was wondering after the last part how you were going to wrap this in just two more parts but you set it beautifully. The major thing to be determined (at least to me) is whether Lois ends up staying with this Clark or going back to her probably distraught Clark in the other time/dimension. I can't wait until the wrap up .

Mike

Additionally, glad to see her discover this Clark/Superman. It will give her more confidence to bring him in on what is happening to her especially since he already knows something is up due to her 'resurrection'.

She, in my opinion, misses her ability to confide in Clark from her previous life. The bouncing ideas back and forth seemed to be the spark that made her intuition really work the best. Clark makes the most sense as the confident in this timeline to be the one she can confide in also for several reasons but foremost would that his very existence is a very strange anomaly. I mean who would be better equipped to fathom and believe in the concept of time travel than an alien who can fly ?

Mike

A delightful part. Lois knows what happen to Superman just in time for the Nightfall asteroid.
Looking forward to part 6.

It just occurred to me, this Lois knows about Krypton but this Clark does not.

I really liked the way she re-worked Honeymoon and The Rival to get rid of Linda and bring Clark back into the picture.

That's what is going to be fun about the next part or parts (notice the ? after the 6). Lois knows a lot that Clark doesn't it will be fun to see what she tells him and what she keeps to herself. And of course does she get to go back to her Clark or stay with her new Clark. Lots to work with here so it will be interesting to see where Dandello goes with this. I mean first she has to make him Superman but then... I mean ASU seems to be a natural but we still have Lex and Trask has yet to make an appearance. As I said lots to work with here. Dandello could wrap it in one more part but personally I really like where the story is going and would love to see it extend out a bit.

Mike

Additionally, a lot of things will start making sense to Lois after this revelation. One thing, her lack of noticing hot and cold...

Mike

Awesome.

The way I figure it: unless Lex was responsible for the original Lois's disappearance in this time-line he doesn't care since he was only interested in Lois because of her relationship with Superman (and possibly exposure to 'Revenge'). Although Lois having his private number might give him pause.

However, Trask is an interesting problem.

That is confusing as it is apparent that Superman has yet to make his appearance in this time-line, not surprising as it was Lois's "you ought to do like I do and bring a change of close" line that triggered the idea in Clark to adopt a secret identity (Superman) and with him climbing out of the bay in his street clothes after stopping the tsunami...

Anyway like you say Trask is a different issue. Since there is no Superman yet the approach will have to be different. Girl you have a lot of ground to cover in one part (there goes that ? again :/).

Love the story and the way it is unfolding so I won't be upset if it extends to 7,8,9,10 parts. When I was working on the TOCs I noticed a number of writers starting with 1/8 and ending with 12/12 and then you have Shane and Virginia who just refuse to put an end number on the stories they just end when they end.

Thanks again for such a different and compelling story.

Mike

I'm also hoping for many additional chapters in this fine story. Hmmm... Linda is now in the afterlife due to the bomb? And Clark Kent has come to Lex Luthor's attention? That can't be good.

Interesting that Oliver Queen and Bruce Wayne were out of town when Harrington was dining with the defense contractors. Maybe they're honest or something.

I sure hope that Lois and Clark have a long talk. Of course, Clark will probably think that Lois is crazy. But she'll have some knowledge that will turn him around.

So... will we see Superman soon?

This is a version of the AltVerse perhaps Trask died and Bureau 39 disbanded.