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Prior chapters and feedback are catalogued in the handy TOC put together by LabRat and Mike M.

As promised, this chapter is a little early. The next post will be Friday morning.

Thank you, everyone, for your comments so far!

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Delightful part.


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I loved the part with Lois and Clark traveling to London and Wells' elaborate plan for them to contact him if they had the need.

The other part is probably as I expected: teenage Caitlin taking it all in like it was pretty much normal and Emily freaking out...

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Interesting that Wells was born in Kent. Tempus would love the irony. cool And Lois's hunch was right, as always. clap

At least now Kara has somebody that believes her and don't think she is crazy. She must be somewhat relieved.

Looking forward to Caitlin and Emily getting to know Lois and Clark. grin

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I'm glad that Wells set up this secret way for Lois and Clark to contact him if ever they were in temporal trouble, but you'd *think* (then again, this IS H.G. Wells) he would have told them about it before now. I love the pressing of the secret bricks. It's so Harry Potter! I wonder if HG Wells discovered another dimension where HE was a real person. I'm interested to see what happens with Lois and Clark on their time-traveling journey.

Yes, Emily's world was just knocked on its side. What she thought was fiction was actually reality. It will be good for Caitlin not to put limits on her possibilities.


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Kevin was voluble in filling in the back story from the earlier movies and the comics.

Showing that it's good to be a comics fan. You never know when that exhaustive knowledge will come in handy.

As in this story, which is about Superman, sort of, but is hysterically funny and depends on comics knowledge: And Then The Heroes Came Along by Roga.


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Haven't mentioned this before - outstanding job on the chapter titles. Very funny.

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Originally Posted by AndyG
Haven't mentioned this before - outstanding job on the chapter titles. Very funny.

I agree and I thought they were neat enough that I added them to the TOC.

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Really cute story. Looking forward to more of it.
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Thanks for the kind comments, everyone! Sorry I didn't respond earlier… this week was very busy for me.


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