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Super Shook Up TOC I'd love to know what you think of the epilogue! Sara 
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Awwww.  Just the perfect note to end on! Now, more! 
VirginiaR.
"On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling"
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"clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.
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I just read through the whole story. So waffy! I loved it. Glad you were inspired to finish the story.
You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie. 
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Excellent! I love revelation fics, and yours give me the pleasure of imagine L&C getting together sooner in the story. 
Clark: "So what are you saying? I should go crawling back on my hands and knees?"
Martha: "No, honey. Fly back. It's faster!!"
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That was a great and real end! Congratulations!  Artemis
History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod
Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis
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Hi Sara!  All the pieces of his life had clicked back into place. Clark Kent. Superman. Lois. Awww…he found Pythagoras again! Like didn't you just fly into space, putting your life on the line for the entire planet? Again!"
Oh. That.  "Yeah, this'll definitely be a day to remember."
The Real End Awwwwww… That was an adorable ending! And so worth it!  Michael
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Great fun, worth the wait. : )
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That's a very sweet ending. It makes me wonder, though, how many coworkers saw them kissing through the conference room window?
"It is a remarkable dichotomy. In many ways, Clark is the most human of us all. Then...he shoots fire from the skies, and it is difficult not to think of him as a god. And how fortunate we all are that it does not occur to him." -Batman (in Superman/Batman #3 by Jeph Loeb)
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Thanks for all the wonderful feedback!! (And sorry for the delayed response!) Now I gotta polish this up for the archive... Sara
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