Only half-way!?
What's going to happening to poor Kara, et al, in the second half of your story?
This was a nice interlude in the action. Everyone is relaxing at "camp" David, but I can understand Emily's worry about what the future holds for them now that they've been outed. Even if Kara is reunited with her folks and taken back to her own dimension, I'm better there are some criminals out there who will still target Emily and Caitlin, just in case. It's not like their lives will ever go back to "normal".