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If you missed an earlier chapter (or two, or three) they're all collected here, thanks to LabRat and Mike M. Chapter 29 will be posted Friday morning.

So, what do you think?

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I loved this part. The depiction of Kara as truly just an 11 year old girl was spot on. The reaction of the chief in helping her come up with ideas was pitch perfect also.

But my favorite line was the last one...

Mike

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I adored reading that little bit from the President's daughter.


CLARK: No. I'm just worried I'm a jinx.
JONATHAN: A jinx?
CLARK: Yeah. Let's face it, ever since she's known me, Lois's been kidnapped, frozen, pushed off buildings, almost stabbed, poisoned, buried alive and who knows what else, and it's all because of me.
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“Do you know how clouds are formed?”

Kara thought for a moment. “Like, the water cycle? Sure! There was a Magic School Bus book about it.”

Thereby reminding the fire chief that, despite her awesome powers, she is only a kid.

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Loved the magic school bus reference...since my kids watch that every day.


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I'm really enjoying this series! (I've read each chapter about 3 times so far.)

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Thank you for the comments, everyone! Kara being a kid was one of the fun things about writing this story. smile


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