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Any thoughts?

I liked this part, but it was too short. It definitely left me wanting more.

So what are the odds that Lois and Clark are the HMWCs for each other? (Once again, I'm hearing "If You Like Pina Coladas" while I'm reading this story.)

Incidentally, I liked you use of an image in the story; I don't think I've ever seen that done before, and it worked out very well.

Joy,
Lynn

I'm glad Clark went to meet Jenny and not Lois. I'm hoping he has a new friend to help him prank his best friend back. I doubt that's not going to happen because this Clark isn't very good at planning. (The one from the comics is better at pulling the wool over Lois's eyes.)

Wow! Lois realized her true feelings much earlier than I expected. I hope that Clark can sense what's going on with her and her jealousy of him having found someone. Still, ABOUT TIME! Since Lois doesn't know about SM, will she think him dashing off from time to time him going to meet his new girlfriend? Hee-hee. Serves her right for interfering.

Hmmmm. I wonder if Lois and Clark would get matched up on the Wild Card / soul mate pick, since they both have to agree to it. I could see Lois going for it since Clark had found Jenny, but why would Clark agree to it? How much more frustration and aggravation will he have to go through before he would agree to that? Then, again, he does have Jimmy the computer hacker genius on his side. That's just the revenge Lois needs for setting him up multiple times without his okay. I can't see this having actually happen since I doubt there's been time for Jimmy to set this up.

I wonder what would happen if Vatman showed up NOW as opposed in S1?

I've always *LOVED* that song, Lynn! It's a great story-song... except for the fact that both of them try to cheat on one another. I tried to write a non-LnC story based on its underlying premise once, but I never finished it.

Oh, I love that song! Memories!

Another great entry Victoria! Oh by the way, I just got finished watching The Young Victoria with Emily Blount and Rupert Friend. Talk about romance!

Anyhow, Lois needs to stop interfering in Clark’s life and start being a part of his life! Come on Lois, this is decade four and you are still playing silly High School games? The Pact be hanged, tell this gorgeous guy that they have a future.

Love the imagery!

Hmmm...when I got to the part where Lois gets the e-mail about the Wild Card pick, my first thought was that Clark had sent it over to her from his computer (after having logged into the site). He had just gotten his password info/etc from Lois, so I thought he maybe (barring anything too 'technical looking' on his part), could have just written the e-mail in a way that made it seem like it was sent 'officially'. You really have me wondering...


I, too, can see Lois going for a date like this--what does she have to loose? she thinks Clark has found Jenny--but totally agree that I can't see Clark actually getting talked into agreeing to this date (unless he set the whole thing up ). Which is exactly what I hope is happening? Please? Lets have them go on a date !


I really admire how Clark handled everything with Jenny--a true gentleman. And wow--I love that even Jenny seemed to see something 'more' between Clark and Lois....

Speaking of 'more'...yeah, Lois! I was delightedly surprised to see Lois come clean with herself with her true feelings. I thought it would take her longer to acknowledge where her heart was, too.


So we have Clark in love with Lois....Lois in love with Clark....and a potential Wild Card date coming up. Eek--let it be between the two of them .


Btw--love the imagery, also. Very cool idea, KK . It added a lot to the story.

Can't wait to see what happens next--this is great .
Laura

New part!
Well, apparently not by offering up sexual favors, that’s for sure. Otherwise, we would be reading an entirely different story.

Dr. FRISKIN: So, Mr. Kent. Have you had those fantasies about your partner dating other women longer or is this a recent development?

So, not a singles restaurant, then?

Oh.

Basically, model, then?

JENNY: Why do the hot ones always have to be gay!

JENNY: Maybe, if I press really hard, I could use the butter knife…

RALPH: Don’t worry. Women do that with me all the time.

So, did she do drugs?

To get out of the pact, of course. Sometimes he can be a bit dense.
Dr. KLEIN:

JENNY: Yep, caught another gay one. This one hasn’t even come out of the closet yet. Just my luck.



I wonder if she might move into Lois’s building, dye her hair brunette, and befriend the nice lady in 501. Then, one evening…

She delusional?

Duh! After she put so much work into it!

Not perfect. Too blonde. Too fragile. Too less of a reporter. Too less of a Lois.









So…Clark?

It’s Clark, right? Right? RIGHT? Unless she’s been paired up with Ralph. Then it’s also

Michael

Sorry, it was short. There are longer chapters to come.

No comment.

Thanks. I was hoping to convey what the e-mail may have looked like, and how tacky it was. It's much easier with an image. Not that I spent much time on it... I just pretended to send myself an e-mail and then took a screenshot. LOL.

Yup. This Clark decided back in Chapter 2 that he needed a plan to win over Lois. Has he come up with that plan yet. Nope!

Yes. Lois is now suffering from the aftereffects of her own meddling! Isn't it great?

You've seen the next chapter by now. Clark has also agreed. Was Lois ridiculous claim the reason do you think? Is Clark at the end of his frustration?

Thanks.

LOIS: I'll never stop interfering in Clark's life! Come on!

Thank you.

Wow, that would be quick thinking (and underhanded thinking) from Clark!

Lois and Clark on a date? Hmmm. Not sure about that. Maybe you should read Chapter 9.

Well, Clark had do the 'right' thing, or he wouldn't be Clark!

A few people are shocked that Lois admitted her feelings to herself already. Well, I'm guessing there will be even more shocked readers after the Chapter 9 is posted.

Tut tut. Everyone wants the HMWC to be between the two main characters of the story. *sighs*

Yes, we would. And I know you REALLY want to be reading that story.

CLARK: Jerk is your middle name, Ralph, that's why.

*sigh* Always think the worst, don't you Michael. Take a leaf out of Clark's book and always think the best of people.

You do realise that Clark doesn't have the benefit of reading the story and seeing Lois' internal thoughts, don't you?



I think you have the wrong idea about Jenny. *looks at Michael sternly*

*nods vigorously*

Surpised? Didn't think she'd admit it yet?

What? *looks innocent*

*whistles*

Virginia showed me a lot about Lex in that other story. Plus, Clark wasn’t too convinced of his Lois, either, so… this might be a nurture thingy…
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So, not psycho-thriller material, then?



New part! New parts!

Michael