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Comments: In time, somewhere 4 #256895 08/01/14 05:10 PM
Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 814 Texas ShayneT OP Features Writer
OP ShayneT Features Writer Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 814 Texas	Well, I guess we're moving right along here... Last edited by ShayneT; 08/01/14 05:11 PM.

Re: Comments: In time, somewhere 4 ShayneT #256896 08/01/14 06:24 PM
Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner
VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	Oh, my. Lex Luthor must behind this ultimate version of Punked, because only HE could orchestrate such an elaborate hoax. So, the dress was found 100 years earlier in Room 416, but Lois Lane was checked into Room 420? Whose room was 416, I wonder? Clark Kent's? If the dress was made to fit Lois, then putting on the 100 year old dress won't transport her back in time. She must have been transported back without the dress (in her normal clothes?) and had the dress made back then. Or did someone else have it made for her? How or where will Lois fall into a time hole? AND how will she get back? Will she get back? Or will she fall into a time hole which will take her further into the future? Is Clark stuck in time? (That question still hasn't been answered.) Can wait to find out. I love a good mystery with magical and romantic elements. VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: Comments: In time, somewhere 4 ShayneT #256900 08/01/14 08:44 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,800 Likes: 30 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,800 Likes: 30 Somewhere on the East Coast	Yes indeed, who was in room 416? Time Travel stories with H.G. Wells is common with Lois and Clark, but this time Mr. Wells is absent. Hmmm, the plot is moving right along. Quote There was a knock on the door. As there wasn’t time to change clothes, Lois stepped out of the bathroom and looked through the peephole. Just because she was a thousand miles away from Metropolis didn’t mean that problems couldn’t have followed her from there. She’d had assassination attempts in the past. Lois' life seems to have been threatened more times than a few. She is not a happy young woman, it appears as if her only friend is Perry White. What happened that Perry sent her to this lovely old hotel to recuperate? Will we be getting a little more backstory on that end? This reader would love to know. Part 5? Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: Comments: In time, somewhere 4 ShayneT #256902 08/01/14 08:55 PM
Joined: Sep 2006 Posts: 391 Silicon Valley DebbieG Beat Reporter
DebbieG Beat Reporter Joined: Sep 2006 Posts: 391 Silicon Valley	Quote “Well,” Lois said. “With any luck I’m about to find out who she was.” Indeed. This ought to be quite interesting. Great story! I'm enjoying it.

Re: Comments: In time, somewhere 4 ShayneT #256909 08/01/14 10:27 PM
Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 2,020 Portland, Oregon, USA F Framework4 Kerth
Framework4 Kerth F Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 2,020 Portland, Oregon, USA	First off, delightful tale as always. I still haven't looked for the movie but I am enjoying the tale. second Quote “I don’t have a name, but I do have a number. The dress was found in room 416.” Quote She turned the page, holding her breath. Guests were signing in at six in the morning, seven…there it was….room 420, 9:18 AM. Ignoring the earlier comments I am assuming that is a typo since Lois is LOOKING for room 420? Framework4

Re: Comments: In time, somewhere 4 Framework4 #256914 08/02/14 12:04 AM
Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 814 Texas ShayneT OP Features Writer
OP ShayneT Features Writer Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 814 Texas	I'm afraid so...sigh

Re: Comments: In time, somewhere 4 ShayneT #256915 08/02/14 12:59 AM
Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner
VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	And here I thought she was just looking for a woman's name in the register. VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: Comments: In time, somewhere 4 ShayneT #257339 08/12/14 08:14 PM
Joined: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,823 IolantheAlias Pulitzer
IolantheAlias Pulitzer Joined: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,823	The plot thickens! She has the dress, she has the vintage $20 bills, she has her signature in the hotel register, it's all in line for her to go back in time!

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