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FDK: Autumn In Paris Part 1 of 1 #258624 10/05/14 09:00 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,800 Likes: 30 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana OP Pulitzer
OP Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,800 Likes: 30 Somewhere on the East Coast	Hello. So much for me posting this one-shot on Tuesday! As always, thoughts, complaints and bricks can be sent this way. It's true, Lois and Clark are only mentioned here, but maybe, if I have time. The next story will have our favorite reporting duo. Last edited by Morgana; 10/05/14 09:06 PM. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Autumn In Paris Part 1 of 1 Morgana #258626 10/05/14 09:50 PM
Joined: Jun 2013 Posts: 1,114 California Annie B. Top Banana
Annie B. Top Banana Joined: Jun 2013 Posts: 1,114 California	Wonderful new story! I can't wait to see what you write next! Quote He thought ‘I always fantasized about being James Bond, but right now having Superman’s mastery of flight would be supremely helpful.’ "The name's Klein. Bernard Klein." Quote He cherished the way she spoke his name, the combination of French and Nigerian accents were like the melding of a precise mathematical proof. Beautiful way of putting it. Quote A distasteful frown flicked over the man’s face. “To answer your second question: Who am I? Let me assure you, I am no one of any great importance; merely your jailor, Captain Zod.” And the plot thickens! "Oh, you can’t help that," said the Cat: "we’re all mad here. I’m mad. You’re mad." "How do you know I’m mad?" said Alice. "You must be," said the Cat, "or you wouldn’t have come here.” - Lewis Carroll, Alice in Wonderland

Re: FDK: Autumn In Paris Part 1 of 1 Annie B. #258635 10/06/14 01:48 AM
Joined: Apr 2004 Posts: 233 France S Sydney Hack from Nowheresville
Sydney Hack from Nowheresville S Joined: Apr 2004 Posts: 233 France	Yes! You posted! I so love your story, Morgana. May be, one day, we'll read about Bernard and Abrihet in France... And it was the first time I was a beta! Thanks for that! Sydney Non ! non, c’est bien plus beau lorsque c’est inutile ! (Edmond Rostand)

Re: FDK: Autumn In Paris Part 1 of 1 Morgana #258638 10/06/14 10:40 AM
Joined: Apr 2013 Posts: 1,358 Likes: 1 Tulsa, OK Mike M Top Banana
Mike M Top Banana Joined: Apr 2013 Posts: 1,358 Likes: 1 Tulsa, OK	I got your PM yesterday evening and then promptly lost Internet due to a U-Verse failure until this morning (some sort of a regional issue)... This certainly looks like a bridge to at least one (maybe two) other stories for the future. I am very glad you are continuing to explore this version of the Lois and Clark story because I am personally very invested in these characters. It will be interesting to see how you weave Bernie and Abrihet's story in with "Lex on New Krypton" story (nice intro to Zod at the end). We at least you won't be searching for things to write about for a while with "Airport" and "The Globe" and now this. I can't wait to see where you go next with these folks. Some is fairly predictable given what we know with the canon story but other parts where you veer away from canon get very interesting. All I know is this vignette has me smiling a great deal and for that Thanks! Mike Create all the happiness you are able to create. Remove all the misery you are able to remove. Jeremy Bentham

Re: FDK: Autumn In Paris Part 1 of 1 Morgana #258639 10/06/14 12:52 PM
Joined: Jan 2010 Posts: 1,357 Cape Girardeau C Christina Top Banana
Christina Top Banana C Joined: Jan 2010 Posts: 1,357 Cape Girardeau	Zod?? Ooooh, this is going to get interesting CLARK: No. I'm just worried I'm a jinx. JONATHAN: A jinx? CLARK: Yeah. Let's face it, ever since she's known me, Lois's been kidnapped, frozen, pushed off buildings, almost stabbed, poisoned, buried alive and who knows what else, and it's all because of me. -"Contact" (You're not her jinx, you're her blessing.)

Re: FDK: Autumn In Paris Part 1 of 1 Morgana #258656 10/06/14 06:21 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,800 Likes: 30 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana OP Pulitzer
OP Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,800 Likes: 30 Somewhere on the East Coast	AnnieB Quote "The name's Klein. Bernard Klein." Anyone who reads my work knows I love the gentle scientist and now he has someone to love as well. Quote Wonderful new story! I can't wait to see what you write next! Thank you! Coming from the woman who is taking Clark Kent to new places in the Panem story this is a great compliment. Last edited by Morgana; 10/06/14 09:03 PM. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Autumn In Paris Part 1 of 1 Morgana #258659 10/06/14 07:37 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,800 Likes: 30 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana OP Pulitzer
OP Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,800 Likes: 30 Somewhere on the East Coast	Christina Quote Zod?? Ooooh, this is going to get interesting Yeah, it will be! Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Autumn In Paris Part 1 of 1 Morgana #258698 10/09/14 04:57 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,800 Likes: 30 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana OP Pulitzer
OP Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,800 Likes: 30 Somewhere on the East Coast	Mike M Search for things to write about? Are you kidding? Sorry to hear about your internet connection. That has got to be the worst!!! Quote This certainly looks like a bridge to at least one (maybe two) other stories for the future. I am very glad you are continuing to explore this version of the Lois and Clark story because I am personally very invested in these characters. The characters have drawn me as well and I'm really curious as to what direction the story will take. But as was mentioned, I have other stories that are begging to be finished. The Globe has been ignored for far too long. I am so glad this story made you smile. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Autumn In Paris Part 1 of 1 Morgana #258699 10/09/14 05:07 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,800 Likes: 30 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana OP Pulitzer
OP Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,800 Likes: 30 Somewhere on the East Coast	Sydney Quote I so love your story, Morgana. May be, one day, we'll read about Bernard and Abrihet in France... And it was the first time I was a beta! Thanks for that! As was mentioned to Mike M, I want to see them in Paris as well! Someday maybe we will! Without your insight of French culture and the Sorbonne this story would have been a mess. Thank you so much for all the help. We will do it again someday! Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Autumn In Paris Part 1 of 1 Morgana #258763 10/12/14 11:08 PM
Joined: Sep 2006 Posts: 391 Silicon Valley DebbieG Beat Reporter
DebbieG Beat Reporter Joined: Sep 2006 Posts: 391 Silicon Valley	Interesting juxtaposition of two stores: Bernie and Abrihet, and Luthor on New Krypton. Can we see more of both? Quote Captain Zod Hmm. Perhaps Lex will be trying for Emperor of Australia? I’m intrigued that we’re seeing Zod instead of Nor. I’d love to know the backstory!

Re: FDK: Autumn In Paris Part 1 of 1 Morgana #258771 10/13/14 08:08 AM
Joined: Aug 2004 Posts: 2,578 Likes: 10 Brazil - RS Ultra Woman Pulitzer
Ultra Woman Pulitzer Joined: Aug 2004 Posts: 2,578 Likes: 10 Brazil - RS	This story started as a lovely view of Paris and... surprise! New-Krypton! What a twist! Quote A distasteful frown flicked over the man’s face. “To answer your second question: Who am I? Let me assure you, I am no one of any great importance; merely your jailor, Captain Zod.” And I was not expecting this. Zod! Zod and Luthor together! It can't be good. If they become allies it would be dangerous for New-Krypton and Earth. <<shivers>> This story has a lot of potential to go on and on... Andreia "My wife's love is what unites Krypton and Earth in my heart. Without it, without her, I truly would be in hell." ~ Superman: Man of Tomorrow #15

Re: FDK: Autumn In Paris Part 1 of 1 Morgana #258839 10/16/14 06:16 PM
Joined: May 2003 Posts: 492 MD, USA dcarson Beat Reporter
dcarson Beat Reporter Joined: May 2003 Posts: 492 MD, USA	Zod and Luthor will both betray each other. But they can do a lot of damage before then. The Moon Society

Re: FDK: Autumn In Paris Part 1 of 1 Morgana #258844 10/17/14 07:15 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,800 Likes: 30 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana OP Pulitzer
OP Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,800 Likes: 30 Somewhere on the East Coast	Sorry for not getting back and writing sooner, everytime there's a chance something else come up! Debbie G Quote Interesting juxtaposition of two stores: Bernie and Abrihet, and Luthor on New Krypton. Can we see more of both? Ideas are banging around my head, trying to get the threads of both plots to work in one story. Quite the challenge. Quote Hmm. Perhaps Lex will be trying for Emperor of Australia? His 'empire' will be very small. Quote I’m intrigued that we’re seeing Zod instead of Nor. I’d love to know the backstory! So am I! Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Autumn In Paris Part 1 of 1 Morgana #258845 10/17/14 07:25 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,800 Likes: 30 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana OP Pulitzer
OP Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,800 Likes: 30 Somewhere on the East Coast	UltraWoman Quote This story started as a lovely view of Paris and... surprise! New-Krypton! shock What a twist! shocked Yeah, that was the bonus mentioned in the outset. Showing what happened to Lex after he was thrown into the aperture of light. Quote And I was not expecting this. Zod! thud Zod and Luthor together! dizzy It can't be good. If they become allies it would be dangerous for New-Krypton and Earth. <<shivers>> This story has a lot of potential to go on and on... hyper Cliffhangers are great when done right! Maybe Jor-El should have sentenced Lex to the Phantom Zone after all? Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Autumn In Paris Part 1 of 1 Morgana #258846 10/17/14 07:31 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,800 Likes: 30 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana OP Pulitzer
OP Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,800 Likes: 30 Somewhere on the East Coast	DCarson Quote Zod and Luthor will both betray each other. But they can do a lot of damage before then. Those two wouldn't know the quality of loyalty if it bit them. We shall see what I'm able to put together. To one and all thanks so much for the positive feedback, as one FoLC writer once said, it equates love!! Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Autumn In Paris Part 1 of 1 Morgana #259120 11/02/14 08:13 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31	Hi Morgana! Working myself through the backlog Quote follow-up to the epilogue Quote There is a strong possibility this will expand into a trilogy but other stories come first… Ooooh! Quote It was exciting to acquaint Lois with their plans. Marriage? Or cloning Superman? Quote when separated by three thousand mile of dark, blue Atlantic Ocean. CLARK: I could commute. But working with Lois is much more fun. Plus, it’s better for her life expectancy. Quote when he had seen an article she had posted in a journal on metallurgy. Oooh! What if she’s the one behind Adamantium? Quote He could not begin to remember how many times he would call her to ask a quick metallurgic question Like ‘what to do when a kryptonite-incused lead bullet is stuck into living tissue? Quote “Yes, I will take care of renting out my condo and making sure there is someone to cover for me at the lab.” For the next time when Superman has an ‘accident’ with green paint or something? Quote “Chéri, if I can teach the strongest man in the world to waltz, I can teach you!” But he can float! Quote It seems odd to me, but since Lex Luthor’s disappearance, both she and Clark are more relaxed. Lois relaxing? /goes off to buy some survival rations/ Quote One moment Lex was in the familiar and comfort surroundings of his office, the next he was forcefully thrown into a cold void only to land unceremoniously on a surface of rough hewn stones. Ooooh! Quote He tried to stand and regain his balance, but it was impossible. A giant hand seemed to have laid over him, refusing to allow his protesting muscles to move. SUPER EARTH: Ooops? Quote walked over to the woman who must have spoken to him, a fascinating creature with long black hair that spilled down her back. Really, Lex? Being crushed by 10g or something of the likes and still honry? Quote If he does not desire to do so, wouldn’t it be better to send him to the Phantom Zone instead? It would be so much cleaner Than when Lex’s muscles fail and he makes a mess on the floor? Quote He would have to struggle to continue to exist, but he would be alive and contained.>> ZOD: So, tell me more about this ‘Earth’… Quote Once he was asleep, Zara removed a small, green gelatin pellet from the tray and placed it in Lex’s ear. Zara? Is she a public defender in this reality? Quote Trey snorted in derision, “Good. It will make his life with us bearable.” So he doesn’t go mad when they poke needles in him and probe him and stuff? Quote but will be given his dignity Will they put it in a jar and hand it to him so he can keep it around? Quote “I have a capable man who will be suitable for the task of warder. The duty will give him time to … think.” Jen Mai? Quote “As your husband, the First Lord of Krypton, wishes I shall obey.” He does not seem happy. Makes me wonder if the earlier part Quote My lady, this behavior of the First Lord’s … is unreasonable. didn’t go ‘First Lord’s concubine’ Quote Lex awoke in a large bed; the sea green satin sheets were soft and delectable against his skin. So, country club prison? Quote He was in a sumptuously outfitted bedroom; spacious and appropriate for king. JOSCA: It’s the smallest, most uncomfortable room we have in the palace. Including the stables and the septic tank. Quote He looked around and noticed odd, colorful pennants made of a heavy woven fabric which adorned the walls. Oooooh! He noticed the skin-suits of the previous occupants. Quote These apartments have been constructed for your habitation, it is where you will live out the remainder of that life. LEX: Great. So, do I get some concubines? KRYPTONIAN: Quote “I know that when my people are in your gravity and under the yellow sun we become stronger and faster. In these apartments I am your physical superior. In the next few weeks you will tell me everything about your world: its armies, communications, political arrangements and most of all its defenses. Ching thought that placing me here would isolate me. But he has made a serious tactical error.” Oops? So, do I remember it wrong that Jor-El executed Nor? Or is that General Zod? Quote Captain Zod.” Nice one, Morgana. Looking forward to the next installment Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK: Autumn In Paris Part 1 of 1 Morgana #259122 11/02/14 10:37 AM
Joined: Jul 2010 Posts: 3,883 Pensacola, Florida KenJ Pulitzer
KenJ Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2010 Posts: 3,883 Pensacola, Florida	Michael, You had the early part completely wrong. It was not Lois and Clark that were talking it was Bernie Klein and his Nigerian Princess. Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks" My stories can be found here kj

Re: FDK: Autumn In Paris Part 1 of 1 KenJ #259124 11/02/14 12:15 PM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31	Hi Ken! Originally Posted by KenJ Michael, You had the early part completely wrong. It was not Lois and Clark that were talking it was Bernie Klein and his Nigerian Princess. You thinking about the Clark-commuting bit? He just lent himself to a funny quip Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK: Autumn In Paris Part 1 of 1 Morgana #259129 11/02/14 05:57 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,800 Likes: 30 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana OP Pulitzer
OP Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,800 Likes: 30 Somewhere on the East Coast	Darth Michael Quote You thinking about the Clark-commuting bit? He just lent himself to a funny quip blush Abrihet and Bernie are enjoying the blush of their romance, but they are determined to move forward. Long distance relationships (especially transatlantic ones) are tricky. Quote Quote: “I have a capable man who will be suitable for the task of warder. The duty will give him time to … think.” Jen Mai? No, Jor-El executed both Jen-Mai and Nor after the revolt was stopped. Quote Nice one, Morgana. Looking forward to the next installment jump Thanks, it will be awhile, but it will take place. Last edited by Morgana; 11/02/14 05:58 PM. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

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