I love that you took on Philip Manning and found inspiration in "Smart Kids." Of course it's no one's favorite episode, but I think that makes for an interesting challenge for authors - find a way to make people who didn't like the episode enjoy your take on the characters anyway. There's definitely a place to feel sympathy for Philip's situation and the scene you highlighted rightfully gives us insight into Clark's feelings as an outsider. Well done, Anti-K!
I would encourage authors to find the throwaway characters from the show (especially from the episodes most people didn't like) and dig deeper into their story, turning them into fully realized characters. There is a treasure trove of stories just waiting to be written.
Susan (who holds a special place in her heart for the Smart Kids)