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So... do I have to run and hide?

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hardly!

I realize you don't do a lot of cliffhangers but this one is pretty good . Given the date Lois being pregnant in her late 40's (or even 50 depending on birthdays) could be problematic. Since she did not seem to have any problems with the three previous pregnancies (including twins) the Kryptonian thing problem is probably not the culprit. I assume I know what Clark's wish will be but you could throw us a curve ball...

I personally cannot wait until the next part. So what IS your posting schedule? hint, hint...

Mike

Vicki,

Thank you for the acknowledgement. 'We come to serve.'

I really enjoy working with talented authors.

Mike,

I think that Vicki plans to post one each day so you won't have too long to wait for the next section.

Yikes! Just part one has you down as the Kents' worst Christmas ever! Clark should have known better than to take Lois at her word. She never admits to being in pain unless it's over a 10 on the hospital Richter scale. (1=minor paper cut, 10=hit by truck).

I'm guessing Clark's Christmas wish starts out for a daughter and then switches to Lois and child to both be healthy. Four boys and they're still wanting more? Good thing one of them is super powered.

Hmmm... If this were being written by a different author, I'd be convinced that Lois is losing the baby, especially since this is supposed to live up/down to the "worst Christmas ever" challenge. But surely you, queen of the happy endings, wouldn't write a story like that, would you? Or are you trying to keep from being type cast?

Either way, you have me hooked. When will the other two parts drop?

Joy,
Lynn

Yah--another KK story

...but from the looks of things--oh no! .

I totally agree with Virginia about Clark's wish--a daughter originally b/c he knows how much Lois is wanting one. And then--scary stuff--then a switch of a wish for Clark to having his wife/child be ok.

Really curious where you will take us with this story. And for Lois and Clark--I guess, barring Clark flying her back himself to Metropolis--they are all the way down in Florida while this is happening.

Eagerly wanting to check in on Lois! Post soon . We've gotta find out what's happening to her/Baby Kent!

Thanks, KK
Laura

In view of the setting, time wise, of this story it struck me that it could easily be a sequel to "A T-Shirt Revelation" and I suggested as much to Vicki. They are together, they are in Florida at a conference again ...

It would have been so natural to include some of those scenes as flashbacks, but she wanted to keep this simple.

I tried ...

Even without that, this is an outstanding story.

Well, that's a doozy of a cliffhanger! I'm going to assume this will all work out in the end, because preterm labor at 6 months would result in a very premature baby, and that could have devastating results, and there's no way you'd do that to all of us at Christmas time (particularly without a warning!). So I will wait patiently for the next part and think happy thoughts!

Excellent story! A great one which gives hope and joy. Well written.

LOL. I love my cliffhangers ...

Unless I've got my maths wrong Lois should be just coming up on 40, not 50. Clark was born in 1966, which makes him 39 in 2005.

Nope. The 'Kryptonian' thing is not a problem.

I could. You never know.

Posting schedule is once a day.

And you 'serve' so well.

Oh, then why are you working with me?

Really? Well, see what you think by the end.

Absolutely.

That's a very logical thought.

Yup.

What are you trying to say? *hands on hips*

Oh, Um. I take offense at that. I'm not the queen of happy endings. Um, well, okay, maybe I am. Actually, FYI, I was voted the 'leggings queen' at my postgraduate University.

Good, that means you'll be back to read the next part.

Tonight and tomorrow.

Sorry.

Hmmm, still sounds logical.

Yup, they are. It was one of the stipulations of the challenge. Lois and Clark must be out of town - and Smallville couldn't count.

Is tonight soon enough?

They are. I noticed the coincidence when writing it myself.

It's not specifically a sequel and I guess it's up to the reader to decide, now that you have pointed it out.

Thanks Ken.

Naaa. It's quite tame. I did worse in The Wedding Pact.

You noticed my lack of warning! Hmmmm, maybe that's a little subtle hint as to the eventual outcome of the story.

'Hope and Joy'. I don't think any of the readers will believe you at the moment. But they may need reminding that YOU have already read it all the way to the end!