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Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks"

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Good chapter, but it seems a little too sensuous for this section of the forum.


"Oh, you can’t help that," said the Cat: "we’re all mad here. I’m mad. You’re mad."
"How do you know I’m mad?" said Alice.
"You must be," said the Cat, "or you wouldn’t have come here.”

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Thanks Anne, I grabbed the wrong file. Sorry!

It has been corrected.

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Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks"

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Lois's musings were interrupted by Reed saying, "Must be tough, being a reporter. Especially for a woman."

Lois's time with Clark appeared to be softening her somewhat, because her reply was conciliatory, "No tougher than it must be for a detective."

Reed shook her head and replied, in a bitter tone, "It's a boy's club."

Lois nodded in agreement and in a heartfelt tone replied, "Tell me about it."

Det. Reed is seldom mentioned in fanfic which is a shame. Her conversation in the trash compactor with Lois was very honest. Lois needed a female friendship outside of her work environment. Listening to them discuss hair and nails is all part of the girl talk!

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In a small voice, Lois replied, "Honolulu. We were on vacation at the time and decided to go to ‘the big island' for a movie and dinner."

"Must be nice! Vacationing in Hawaii. I presume that you flew."

"Yeah, those frequent flyer miles really pile up when your in-laws live a few states away."

They sure do! rotflol This was a great line and is perfectly normal!

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Finally, they lay side by side and cuddled in the afterglow. She said, "Thanks for saving me … again."

"Always, my love. Always. Does this mean we can check Trash Compactor off your bucket list?"

"Well, you did say I was a lot like Princess Leia."

"The resemblance is scary."


As long as she doesn't have to wear that metal bikini she should be fine!

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Lois said, "Come on, I'm starving and you're buying." After a few seconds, she said, "And just in case you did miss the moral to this story -- you should trust what's in people's hearts, not just the facts, ma'am. I hate to say, I told you so, but I told you that Eugene was innocent. My gut told me that he was."

"Lois, if I have ever had any doubts about your intuition in the past, I need to make a note to not ever doubt it in the future." He stood and helped Lois with her jacket, "Let's go get lunch."

Didn't they just walk into the bullpen? I thought it was morning and those two are going for lunch? Did I miss something here?

All in all a neat part! clap


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