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So. All done, for now.

Coping with Destiny is mapped out ... but I'm working on something else first...

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Thus ends the second part in a great series!


She's not being cruel, this is for the best. I can hardly wait for the next installment!

ACK! You're leaving us there? You can't leave us there! Especially since it will be a while during which we will have to cope without Destiny (so to speak).

And Lois, you may know a lot about Clark, but how little you really know him if you think jealousy is the way to his heart...

Joy,
Lynn

SEQUEL!!!!!
Okay, I see how this is a complete story, taking us all the way through the pilot. But you are CRUEL, making me wait for my WAFF! But I guess the fact that I'm begging for more means I liked the story.

What a leaving off place, KK! I agree with the others in hopes that your muse blesses you with some sleepless and productive nights.

I do wonder why Clark didn't show back up at work after the appearance of Superman. I hope Perry doesn't get on him for not pushing himself forward -- career wise -- as in "couldn't you tell it was a big news day and we needed you HERE". As Lois kept glancing back at the elevator, I wondered if Clark had flown off to Smallville to tell his folks that Lois knows something about him and isn't sharing, but then you let us know that Superman was busy around town. I do hope, at least, that he showed up with a Superman story for Perry.

Jealousy? Hmmm. Apparently, Lois has forgotten that Clark isn't one to push himself forward in any type of triangle (be it with Superman, Lex, or Scardino). Also, he might loose interest in a woman who forgets her "dream" man just because Superman has shown up. Praising Superman's body never was a way to Clark's heart. Praising Superman's heart and defending his actions / honor would earn her bigger brownie points with her crush.

I'm glad Lois suggested lunch. It makes me wonder if in the next story (when Trask and B39 shows) if Lois will take advantage of the situation and kiss Clark, or be too scared to push herself forward in that way. Or will she have kissed him beforehand. Will she slip and call Superman "Clark" after the next time Superman rescues her (and they're alone with her flying in his arms)?

You leave us with many unanswered questions. For your muse.

Awww man! And. Now. We. Wait. And wait. And wait.

I really (and I mean really ) have enjoyed this series, KK. My is totally out of wanting more--and soon . Definitely hoping Virginia's above offered chocolate bar helps the muse along ? Oh, and would your muse also enjoy a party with a red balloon? (Hey, I'll try anything to help the cause ).


Interesting note to end on. Clark will think that Lois is falling for Superman, so much so like the series. But with a lot of a 'twist' to it. Hopefully she doesn't keep the Superman Crush going too long, that'll really bring Clark's confusion about them to regular series proportion--the love triangle and all .

Really looking forward to the development of time and history to their relationship so that Lois can feel comfortable to be totally up front with Clark. I think maybe that's where 'Coping with Destiny' comes in? Can-Not-Wait!!!

Laura

I really enjoyed this story and I'm looking forward to the next one.

Thank you. I'm not sure whether you could call it a 'great series' yet. Maybe by the time I've got to the end of all my ideas

Well, I guess it's a 'fun' kind of cruel, not an 'evil' kind of cruel.

Sorry. *runs and hides*

Not 'true' jealousy, just teasing.

Um. Yes? Eventually!!

Yes, but as well as fitting with the Pilot episode, it was meant to be the story of Lois meeting Clark and Superman and coming to the realisation that she can live her own life, not OLs. That's why this story was very similar to the Pilot, but the following stories may be more different as Lois will make her own decisions, not what she thinks OL did.

There's plenty enough WAFF in my other stories ... get used to this. Only kidding, there will definitely be WAFF in the sequel. But it is also a good idea to get used to non-WAFF from me!

It's coming, but very slowly as I'm working on other stuff, but I'm not leaving this behind, so there is still little bits of work being done.

I was following the show. If you watch the scenes Superman shows up to speak to Lex after this, and it's night, and then Clark shows up at the Planet and Lois is in different clothes, so it's obviously the following day. I came up with the reason that Superman is out doing Superman-ly stuff now that he is free to be seen, and help people.

Nope. He's still under the impression that he's not that big a deal, just like cannon. He gets surprised by all the fame in the following episode.

Ohhh, that WILL happen, and her attempt at jealousy is a 'teasing' attempt. True jealousy would be if she DID start seeing someone else. She's not going to do that, because all three 'men' in this scenario are actually Clark.

The B39 scenarios are very important ... but it's NOT the next episode. Neverending Battle was aired before Strange Visitor in Britain all those years ago, and stuff that happens in that episode should logically come before stuff in Strange Visitor. And I want it this way, so there!

Yup, I do!

Sorry.

Sounds good. It might help.

Clark thinks Lois is in love with some unattainable man from years ago, and also will have a crush on Superman, yes. But every woman has a crush on Superman, so it's not really going to be a particular problem ... I think.

Me either. Oh, that means I have to write it!

Thanks

Me too. Again, that means I need to write it. Duh!