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FDK- At First Sight 1/1 #262938 04/30/15 07:22 PM
Joined: Oct 2013 Posts: 825 Toowoomba, Australia N NostalgiaKick OP Features Writer
OP NostalgiaKick Features Writer N Joined: Oct 2013 Posts: 825 Toowoomba, Australia	Feedback folder for At First Sight "It means never having to play it cool about how much you like something. It's basically a license to proudly emote on a somewhat childish level rather than behave like a supposed adult. Being a geek is extremely liberating."- Simon Pegg

Re: FDK- At First Sight 1/1 NostalgiaKick #262946 04/30/15 09:30 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,831 Likes: 42 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,831 Likes: 42 Somewhere on the East Coast	Aww, Clark is so earnest and sweet in this tale. Quite nice to listen in on his thoughts, especially when he talking to Perry. Good to read that Professor Carlton was given a mention. Is this a one shot? Because I see lots of AU potential here! Last edited by Morgana; 05/11/15 04:27 AM. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK- At First Sight 1/1 NostalgiaKick #262953 05/01/15 12:01 AM
Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner
VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	A nice POV piece, delving into Clark's inner thoughts... his first impressions of Lois, Perry, and the Daily Planet. Although, he didn't fall in love at first sight with Perry. VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK- At First Sight 1/1 NostalgiaKick #262959 05/01/15 03:38 AM
Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA LMA Top Banana
LMA Top Banana Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA	Loved this piece, NostalgiaKick . And honestly, very much second Morgana's AU potential thought. Would really love to see where further this could go... Clark's thought process--living his life, 'saving' for last Metropolis to visit, meeting Lois for the first time--all had such personality. Really enjoyed where you took us. Love your work. Wonderful job Laura "Where's Clark?" "Right here." ...two simple sentences--with so much meaning. ~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~

Re: FDK- At First Sight 1/1 NostalgiaKick #262990 05/01/15 11:51 PM
Joined: Jan 2011 Posts: 966 Wyoming AntiKryptonite Features Writer
AntiKryptonite Features Writer Joined: Jan 2011 Posts: 966 Wyoming	Lovely story about that moment in the Pilot where I first really sat up and thought, "Wow, there's something here I really like." And that's the thought and feeling you've captured here in this piece. I love getting this glimpse into Clark's thoughts in this pivotal moment of his life, and though short, it was full of his character and personality!

Re: FDK- At First Sight 1/1 NostalgiaKick #263107 05/07/15 11:21 PM
Joined: May 2011 Posts: 6,142 Likes: 3 Connecticut Deadly Chakram Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Deadly Chakram Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: May 2011 Posts: 6,142 Likes: 3 Connecticut	Quote my parents were living proof that it existed Well, this pretty much guarantees that this is NOT Lois' POV. Quote Sometimes it's not what you know, it's who you know. Nowadays, this is becoming more and more universally true. Quote She was a slender, dark haired whirlwind of activity, Love this! Quote I didn't get the job - yet. Yet being the operative word. Lovely little peek inside Clark's mind. Loved it! Battle On, Deadly Chakram "Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent "One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon

Re: FDK- At First Sight 1/1 NostalgiaKick #263111 05/08/15 01:21 AM
Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California groobie Kerth
groobie Kerth Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California	Thanks for posting the story. It was a nice look into Clark's thoughts during the pilot - I always love the WAFFY idea that he felt an instant connection to Lois. You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie.

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