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FDK- Unprofessional Behaviour 1/1 #263608 05/28/15 05:31 PM
Joined: Oct 2013 Posts: 825 Toowoomba, Australia N NostalgiaKick OP Features Writer
OP NostalgiaKick Features Writer N Joined: Oct 2013 Posts: 825 Toowoomba, Australia	Feedback folder for Unprofessional Behaviour I'm glad you all seem to be enjoying these. They're an interesting challenge to write, and having to find a point in each episode to write about is giving me a much deeper insight into Clark's character and his relationships with the people around him. "It means never having to play it cool about how much you like something. It's basically a license to proudly emote on a somewhat childish level rather than behave like a supposed adult. Being a geek is extremely liberating."- Simon Pegg

Re: FDK- Unprofessional Behaviour 1/1 NostalgiaKick #263610 05/28/15 05:38 PM
Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA LMA Top Banana
LMA Top Banana Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA	Awesome--another story in the series! Very interesting take on Clark here in this episode. Again--like in the other stories in this series--you have really made me think. I've never been too bothered by Clark...I've always completely enjoyed the interactions between Lois and Clark undercover and took it for what it was. Reading Clark's thoughts, though, I can 'see' a lot more into the episode, into the scenes. Two sentences that had me Quote Mom would tan my hide if she knew. Ain't that the truth! Ha . ...and... Quote I'm pretty sure she was jealous. To repeat above: Aint that the truth! Was-She-Ever . Lovely job, Laura Last edited by LMA; 05/28/15 05:39 PM. "Where's Clark?" "Right here." ...two simple sentences--with so much meaning. ~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~

Re: FDK- Unprofessional Behaviour 1/1 NostalgiaKick #263622 05/29/15 03:20 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,831 Likes: 42 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,831 Likes: 42 Somewhere on the East Coast	The look on Lois face while Clark was kissing Toni was priceless! So yeah it was definitely unprofessional, but at least he has a sneaking suspicion of how she feels about him. Brava for tackling Clark's thoughts like this. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK- Unprofessional Behaviour 1/1 NostalgiaKick #263871 06/06/15 11:19 PM
Joined: Jan 2011 Posts: 966 Wyoming AntiKryptonite Features Writer
AntiKryptonite Features Writer Joined: Jan 2011 Posts: 966 Wyoming	Well, personally, I love this episode because I LOVE seeing Clark give back to Lois as good as she's been dishing out to him for the past several episodes! He makes me laugh and I cheer him on, because it's nice to see Clark having fun and being able to get one up on her, even in his 'mild-mannered' persona. So, I don't really agree with the viewpoint on this one, but it was still interesting to read. I'm glad in this story he was able to find that ray of light at the end, about Lois being jealous, because every time I watch the last minute of this show, when Lois says she'd only be jealous in his dreams, and he tries to hide his disappointment, it makes me sad. It was nice to get a bit of hope from it instead.

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