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#263671 05/30/15 05:09 PM
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Writing this one was the complete opposite of writing one for Smart Kids... there were so many different themes to choose from. Yay for an episode I actually like smile


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But I hate the fact that one of the only pieces of my home planet that I've ever seen is the only thing that hurts me.

That's the kicker, isn't it? Knowing that an alien world can embrace you, but the planet you were born on can kill you. It's got to hurt on a deeply emotional level.

Well done!


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But I hate the fact that one of the only pieces of my home planet that I've ever seen is the only thing that hurts me.

That's the kicker, isn't it? Knowing that an alien world can embrace you, but the planet you were born on can kill you. It's got to hurt on a deeply emotional level.

Well done!
I agree with DC. That's the one line that was "Oh my!" to me too. I had never thought about it in that light. You keep opening my eyes. Thank you.


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The irony of kryponite...

Completely agree, NostalgiaKick. GGGoH is an episode I really enjoy--many times while watching the show, I've watched the Pilot and then skipped right on over to this one wink. These middle episodes of season one are some of my very favorite.

The line that DC and Virginia pulled really grabbed my attention, too. How completely confusing would kryptonite be to Clark?! Something from home finally...and then for the first time in your life feeling weak, feeling pain...fearing death. How would you make sense out of that?

Love the depth you continue to pull out of each episode. Well done clap.
Laura


"Where's Clark?" "Right here."

...two simple sentences--with so much meaning.

~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~

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