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I had quite a bit of trouble with this one. In every other episode so far, I've been able to find one big thing that gives us a glimpse into Clark's life, and I just couldn't find one big one in Honeymoon in Metropolis. So here's two smaller ones instead.

I wrote and rewrote this story multiple times (hence why it took so much longer) and I'm still not entirely happy with the result.

Feli

I absolutely LOVE 'Honeymoon in Metropolis'. From the first time I saw it, it's easily been one of my all-time favorite episodes. And you know, you hit on exactly why that is...

HIM, to me, is so amazingly great because even though it's a completely 'made up' situation (pretending to be honeymooners, etc) that is happening--this is the episode where Lois and Clark truely (for the first time) get to be completely themselves around each other. There's a bit of that feeling in GGGoH, but Clark is sorta preoccupied with the lack of superpowers--plus they are out of Metropolis, much more out of their routine, etc.

From the end scene in HIM, when they are talking while both in bed, I always came away feeling that Lois really sort of 'discovered' Clark in this episode. Realized that she could be totally herself with him. Realized that being around him was a lot more fun than being alone, closing herself off. Realized that she missed him when he wasn't by her side after their time together.

They both, IMO, really got the framework of what a relationship could look like, be like, with each other in this episode.

And you totally pulled that into your piece . They become legitamate 'friends' in HIM. And they both legitamitely see 'potential' in their friend while getting to know each other over these few days.

You found what I feel while watching. Loved your piece .

Great job
Laura

Lex's "love" for Lois was always manipulative - there was always something in it for him. Clark was able to see this because he knew the kind of person Lex really was behind the scenes.

HIM is, of course, one of the all-time favorites! The comfortable familiarity between them, their adorable playfulness (and, of course, the bed scene!)...wonderful.

First off; the title of this vignette is very appropriate. Lois and Clark discovered different facets of each other's personalities outside of the newsroom. Discoveries which surprised and delighted them.

Lex love anyone besides himself? Nope, not even for a minute!

I don't think Lex was capable of caring for another person. He always came across as being sociopathic to me. But I think he might have gotten a dose of the full strength Revenge formula... He certainly didn't love Lois, but (particularly after The Phoenix) he was obsessed with her.

Thanks for the feedback
Feli

I love the wording here.


Worse when you've done it in a harem outfit.


Interesting idea.


Thank goodness for her "catch the bad guy tunnel vision."


Always some of the hardest moments, they keep Clark so humble. I especially love the scene where they are together in Clark's apartment talking about Lois when she's got amnesia and they can't find her.


Exactly.


So sad, considering what's to come.

Again, love the short peek into the characters! Nicely handled.