Wonderful job
.
The last two sentences:
Because right now, the world needs Superman.
And all they've got is the shell of Clark Kent.
...were really powerful. Well done
.
I've always really liked ASU. I like the plot--the sense of doom. But mostly, I really love watching Clark--completely clueless to his past, but still--fall for Lois. How he's drawn to her. Knows her (in some way) even though he has no memory. He sense her, falls all over again for her. It's such a romantic concept.
And...Lois really does feel it, too. Her 'I mean I love you...like a brother'. Yeah, right
. It's a great moment.
How scary it would be to be Clark in this episode. So much responsibility, so much of everything relying on him. But not remembering a thing. You really captured that.
Awesome job!
Laura