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FDK- Tainted 1/1 #264150 06/17/15 08:53 AM
Joined: Oct 2013 Posts: 825 Toowoomba, Australia N NostalgiaKick OP Features Writer
OP NostalgiaKick Features Writer N Joined: Oct 2013 Posts: 825 Toowoomba, Australia	Feedback folder for Tainted. Sorry this took a few days, real life got in the way... Plus I've been working on A Week in Paris. "It means never having to play it cool about how much you like something. It's basically a license to proudly emote on a somewhat childish level rather than behave like a supposed adult. Being a geek is extremely liberating."- Simon Pegg

Re: FDK- Tainted 1/1 NostalgiaKick #264152 06/17/15 12:31 PM
Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner
VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	Wow. Take a episode and knock it on its side, ONCE MORE! I had never thought about it in this way before. Of course, it would be tainted. How awful for Clark! He finally learns about his birth folks and Luthor (and Jack) steals that moment from him. Brilliant deductive reasoning, Feli! You're really nailing Clark's thought process through-out this series. VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK- Tainted 1/1 NostalgiaKick #264153 06/17/15 01:55 PM
Joined: Jul 2014 Posts: 917 Likes: 2 East Coast USA cuidadora Features Writer
cuidadora Features Writer Joined: Jul 2014 Posts: 917 Likes: 2 East Coast USA	This is exactly what I thought Clark's reaction would be first time I saw this episode. It gave me chills. Exploring Clark's feelings was probably limited by time and the family time slot L&C aired. Thankfully you remedied that. I agree with Virginia, you totally nailed this! Cuidadora "Honey, we didn't care if you were a Russian or a Martian... You were ours... and we weren't giving you to anybody." ~ Martha in Strange Visitor "A love that risks nothing is worth nothing." ~ Jonathan in Big Girls Don't Fly

Re: FDK- Tainted 1/1 NostalgiaKick #264163 06/17/15 05:34 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,831 Likes: 42 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,831 Likes: 42 Somewhere on the East Coast	Reading this story is like peeking over Clark's shoulder as he writes in his journal, revealing all his heartache over what should have been a joyful event. The story is all the more powerful because of the brevity of words. Well done. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK- Tainted 1/1 NostalgiaKick #264164 06/17/15 06:07 PM
Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California groobie Kerth
groobie Kerth Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California	Clark's vulnerability here is very understandable...the messages were for him - private and personal, and those moments with his Kryptonian parents was stolen from him as surely as the globe had been stolen form Clark's apartment. Very good observation. You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie.

Re: FDK- Tainted 1/1 NostalgiaKick #264172 06/18/15 02:28 AM
Joined: Oct 2013 Posts: 825 Toowoomba, Australia N NostalgiaKick OP Features Writer
OP NostalgiaKick Features Writer N Joined: Oct 2013 Posts: 825 Toowoomba, Australia	Thanks everyone! I always thought it had to be heart wrenching for Clark to have the globe stolen at all, let alone at such a crucial time. I wish they'd explored this storyline a bit more on the show, but as cuidadora commented, they really didn't have a lot of time. Feli "It means never having to play it cool about how much you like something. It's basically a license to proudly emote on a somewhat childish level rather than behave like a supposed adult. Being a geek is extremely liberating."- Simon Pegg

Re: FDK- Tainted 1/1 NostalgiaKick #264197 06/19/15 10:25 AM
Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA LMA Top Banana
LMA Top Banana Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA	And again, another amazing job, Feli . I've had moments--thinking how scary it would be that Clark knows that someone else is watching his videos--but never have gone into how violating, how frustrating it would be. To have this one personal thing about himself finally be known to him, but know simultaneously that someone is 'watching it over your shoulder'. Horrible! And then to top it all off, Lois is on the prowl--trying to figure out a story about it all. Watching him, trying to gain article info. What could have been a really amazing time for Clark, instead was quite stressful overall... Great job! Laura Last edited by LMA; 06/19/15 10:25 AM. "Where's Clark?" "Right here." ...two simple sentences--with so much meaning. ~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~

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