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I told you it wouldn't be uplifting...


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...but, boy, it was AWESOME!!! notworthy grin hail

Completely and totally, you captured the angst of this episode. Clark is shattered.

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Everything fell apart so quickly. It feels like I blinked and my whole world changed.


I couldn't have said it better myself clap.

Clark's declaration of love dance , Lois' declaration of hero-worshipping love wallbash , Lois actually accepting Lex's proposal thud. So MUCH happens in this episode. I love all of the momentum, all of the feelings out on the line.

Looking forward to HOL hyper
Laura

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"Where's Clark?" "Right here."

...two simple sentences--with so much meaning.

~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~
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Each time I think to myself, I'll quote this line, I consider another one. So, apparently, I just want to quote your entire vignette. Yes, everything fell apart in the blink of an eye. He lost everything and everyone he cared most (save his parents) about. I agree with the comparison to Kryptonite. Sometimes emotional pain is worse than physical pain. Well done.

At least, we'll see them live happily ever in HoL, right? wink


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Poor Clark! I can see him in the middle of that Ice Field with his heart breaking. Hmmm, maybe it's time to watch that episode again?


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Wow, you captured this beautifully! I remember screaming right with him when he saw Lois accept Luthor’s proposal and kiss him. Heartbreaking!


Superman: I hear you've been looking for me.
Lois: All my life.

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