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FDK- Losing Clark 1/1 #264626 07/06/15 09:11 PM
Joined: Oct 2013 Posts: 825 Toowoomba, Australia N NostalgiaKick OP Features Writer
OP NostalgiaKick Features Writer N Joined: Oct 2013 Posts: 825 Toowoomba, Australia	Feedback folder. Well, that turned out much more melancholy than I intended it to. The first draft was more upbeat, but I think I like this better. Feli "It means never having to play it cool about how much you like something. It's basically a license to proudly emote on a somewhat childish level rather than behave like a supposed adult. Being a geek is extremely liberating."- Simon Pegg

Re: FDK- Losing Clark 1/1 NostalgiaKick #264631 07/06/15 10:11 PM
Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA LMA Top Banana
LMA Top Banana Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA	I liked this a lot . What I enjoyed about it was the sense of longing. Of Lois really wanting to be with Clark, but knowing it wouldn't be fair to both of them. The confusion of that...loving (she thinks) two different people at the same time. But then really, how it's not confusing at all because it all just comes down to loving the same one man completely. The 'love triange between two people'--you completely captured the feel of it . GREAT job! Laura "Where's Clark?" "Right here." ...two simple sentences--with so much meaning. ~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~

Re: FDK- Losing Clark 1/1 NostalgiaKick #264689 07/10/15 07:27 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,800 Likes: 30 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,800 Likes: 30 Somewhere on the East Coast	No, you hit the right tones. Loving one man who is leading two very different lives would be confusing to those outside of the secret. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK- Losing Clark 1/1 NostalgiaKick #264697 07/10/15 07:28 PM
Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 2,020 Portland, Oregon, USA F Framework4 Kerth
Framework4 Kerth F Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 2,020 Portland, Oregon, USA	Well done. Your introspective Lois is delightful. Framework4

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