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Comic is Here. Feedback, Comments, or Questions go here. 
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I'm with Clark.   Great one, Queenie! My only question is about the blonde woman in a tank top and shorts in the first panel. Shouldn't the mayor be dressed more professionally?
VirginiaR.
"On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling"
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Yes, I can't see that going down well with Lois...
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Yay! My audience has doubled! Virginia: Actually, that's the district attor--no, no, I'm kidding.  She's just a random person Clark rescued; if the car behind her resembles a limo, it's because I need more practice drawing cars. 
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My only question is about the blonde woman in a tank top and shorts in the first panel. Shouldn't the mayor be dressed more professionally? Virginia: Actually, that's the district attor--no, no, I'm kidding. She's just a random person Clark rescued; if the car behind her resembles a limo, it's because I need more practice drawing cars. My bad.  That should have read "Chief of Police" not mayor. The caption under the blonde read, "In Wilmington, the Chief of Police addressed..." or is it just a commentary on Wilmington?
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It was actually just meant to be the scrolling text that goes by whenever you're watching a news-story. Not all news shows have those (the channel we get now doesn't do it), but I noticed that some will just cram various headlines into the scrolling text so that your eyes have to keep ping-ponging between the scrolling headlines and the footage of the main story. (And people want to link *cartoons* with ADD! X_X) I'll try to make that clearer the next time it shows up, so thanks for bringing it up.
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It was actually just meant to be the scrolling text that goes by whenever you're watching a news-story. Not all news shows have those (the channel we get now doesn't do it), but I noticed that some will just cram various headlines into the scrolling text so that your eyes have to keep ping-ponging between the scrolling headlines and the footage of the main story. (And people want to link *cartoons* with ADD! X_X) I'll try to make that clearer the next time it shows up, so thanks for bringing it up. Completely understand and agree that current news shows make people have an attention span of 30 seconds and permanently cross eyed. My mistake about the Chief of Police. I should have caught that, but I rarely watch live TV news since I gave up cable.
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I love it! I like how Clark is getting the evil eye from Lois at the end. I'm assuming that in this version, Lois knows that CK=SM, yes?
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I loved it. Your "Much Married" 'verse is great fun.
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Hi Queenie,
I love it. And doubly so because of the mention of "Wilmington." Although I suspect you were referring to the one in North Carolina, I actually work in Wilmington, Delaware. And on one rather obscure DC map (I can't recall which one), Metropolis appeared to be located right around "my" Wilmington.
Do you plan to continue posting? I'm very much looking forward to seeing more of the relationship between this Lois and Clark. And (from the other post), Comic does appear to be a super Dad, much to Jimmy and new-boy's chagrin.
Joy,
Lynn
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Another fun installment. So, Superman's newer than Clark's offspring? I wonder if his son was the reason Clark decided to put on his little-boy pants.  Michael
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