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FDK: A Scene Remembered by FarmerBabe (1/1) #267639 11/28/15 02:51 PM
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OP Shallowford Columnist S Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 739 Likes: 2 Michigan's thumb	FarmerBabe didn't want to create her own account so I'm posting this on her behalf. This is her first story. A Scene Remembered Shallowford

Re: FDK: A Scene Remembered by FarmerBabe (1/1) Shallowford #267641 11/28/15 04:50 PM
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VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	Well, Lex. You snooze, you lose! Shallowford, tell FarmerBabe that this is a great first story! She captured Lois's attitude wonderfully. It's cute and waffy and fun. I love Jimmy's costume. I can just picture him as a safari photographer. And Cat as an Egyptian queen. Yep. Any excuse to paint on clothing. I kept wondering how Clark was going to show up as and who Dracula was. (I was hoping it wasn't Clark, but he's cheesy line pretty much guaranteed that it wasn't.) I'm so glad that Lois was in a playful mood when she saw Clark was following her lead on the retro anniversary costume. My favorite line: Quote "This is so Lois!", thought Jimmy, as cheers and wolf-calls sounded all around them. Lois and Clark didn't hear a thing. Lois was pretty sure the kiss in the picture hadn't lasted this long, but who cares, let it go on forever. A great ending! VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK: A Scene Remembered by FarmerBabe (1/1) Shallowford #267644 11/28/15 06:33 PM
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HiddenMoon Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Feb 2015 Posts: 167 Haec est porta coeli	So cute! Kudos to the wifey Go I Know Not Whither and Fetch I Know Not What

Re: FDK: A Scene Remembered by FarmerBabe (1/1) Shallowford #267649 11/28/15 10:06 PM
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LMA Top Banana Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA	Congrats to FarmerBabe . This was a great story...the set up, the costumes, how right the characters were represented, and especially the end--loved the visual of our sailor holding our nurse, bowing her down, kissing her thoroughly . Hoping to see many more stories from your wife. Awesome job! Thanks for sharing Laura "Where's Clark?" "Right here." ...two simple sentences--with so much meaning. ~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~

Re: FDK: A Scene Remembered by FarmerBabe (1/1) Shallowford #267651 11/28/15 11:12 PM
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HappyGirl Top Banana Joined: Aug 2007 Posts: 1,194 Likes: 1 Northern Indiana	Well done, FarmerBabe. That was clever creative license to use the line as the climax rather than the introduction. You set it up perfectly, and it's completely in character; I could see Lois and Clark getting into that situation. Glad to see Lois is smart enough to enjoy it, too. This is my happily ever after.

Re: FDK: A Scene Remembered by FarmerBabe (1/1) Shallowford #267680 11/29/15 05:44 PM
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groobie Kerth Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California	A new author! That's definitely always welcome! I could absolutely picture that scene at the party, and the kiss with Lois and Clark substituted for the World War 2 couple. Great idea for this story prompt. You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie.

Re: FDK: A Scene Remembered by FarmerBabe (1/1) Shallowford #267681 11/29/15 06:16 PM
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cuidadora Features Writer Joined: Jul 2014 Posts: 917 Likes: 2 East Coast USA	Delightful story! Love it! Cuidadora "Honey, we didn't care if you were a Russian or a Martian... You were ours... and we weren't giving you to anybody." ~ Martha in Strange Visitor "A love that risks nothing is worth nothing." ~ Jonathan in Big Girls Don't Fly

Re: FDK: A Scene Remembered by FarmerBabe (1/1) Shallowford #267686 11/29/15 09:16 PM
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dcarson Beat Reporter Joined: May 2003 Posts: 492 MD, USA	This picture I assume https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/8/87/Kissing_the_War_Goodbye.jpg The Moon Society

Re: FDK: A Scene Remembered by FarmerBabe (1/1) dcarson #267688 11/30/15 04:39 AM
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OP Shallowford Columnist S Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 739 Likes: 2 Michigan's thumb	Originally Posted by dcarson This picture I assume https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/8/87/Kissing_the_War_Goodbye.jpg Yes, the very same one! Shallowford

Re: FDK: A Scene Remembered by FarmerBabe (1/1) Shallowford #267693 11/30/15 04:37 PM
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Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,784 Likes: 28 Somewhere on the East Coast	Great idea, Lois and Clark making a waffy salute to a fantastic moment caught in time. Nicely done story FarmerBabe! Last edited by Morgana; 11/30/15 04:38 PM. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: A Scene Remembered by FarmerBabe (1/1) Shallowford #268155 12/27/15 06:00 AM
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Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,065 Likes: 31	Welcome! Quote She'd even called Lex's office, but his assistant said that unfortunately he was out of town, and wouldn't be back for some time. So, Lex was avoiding her. She'd thought so, but this just confirmed it. To be fair, she’s not working to the benefit of Lex’s orphanage. And she’s been categorized as ‘unlikely to put out’ so Lex has decided to look elsewhere. Quote Now and again Count Dracula'd ask her if she wanted to take his temperature. Lois smiled at him and he moved away, though if she were honest with herself she'd admit it was more of a grimace, or maybe a snarl; anyway, it made him keep leaving, and that was the point. Maybe if she sprayed him with some holy water? Quote She had decided to celebrate the 50th anniversary of the end of World War II. Peggy Carter? Quote Lois had, for a moment, thought about impersonating a society reporter, but wasn't sure she could bring herself to wear that much (er, little) spandex, or show that much skin. Quote she didn't want Kat to think she envied her outfit, or her date, and besides, it looked like they were moving to the dance floor and Lois didn't want to see if those scraps of material stayed on when in motion or not. Maybe lots of glue underneath? Quote Yep, there was Jimmy with his camera, making his way as quick as possible to the dance floor: Jimmy leapt in where Lois feared to - well, burn her retinas, I guess. Quote Finally people moved away to mingle and Lois saw Jimmy, red in the face, coming toward her. Oh? Quote She wanted the picture to to really jump out, make a poignant statement of the whole reason she dressed up as a 1940's nurse. Quote She looked away from Jimmy for a second and saw Tall Dark and Handsome moving toward her. She couldn't believe it - he was dressed as a WWII sailor! He gets it! Quote Without an introduction, without even so much as a word, she grabbed his arm as he passed and spun him around. Their eyes locked. "Kiss me, quick!" Oh, a recreation of the shot from Times Square? Quote Lois was pretty sure the kiss in the picture hadn't lasted this long, but who cares, let it go on forever. What a fun debut! And an unexpected ending Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

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