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FDK: A Sunday Evening 1 / 1 #269010 02/15/16 11:35 AM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,628 Likes: 42 Germany bakasi OP Pulitzer
OP bakasi Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,628 Likes: 42 Germany	Comments go here. It's never too dark to be cool.

Re: FDK: A Sunday Evening 1 / 1 bakasi #269011 02/15/16 12:13 PM
Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA LMA Top Banana
LMA Top Banana Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA	Very good ! I'm really impressed by how you chose these two scenes and merged them together. It really worked well. Loved it ... Laura "Where's Clark?" "Right here." ...two simple sentences--with so much meaning. ~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~

Re: FDK: A Sunday Evening 1 / 1 bakasi #269020 02/16/16 08:47 AM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,628 Likes: 42 Germany bakasi OP Pulitzer
OP bakasi Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,628 Likes: 42 Germany	Thanks, Laura. I'm glad you liked this little vignette. It's never too dark to be cool.

Re: FDK: A Sunday Evening 1 / 1 bakasi #269032 02/17/16 10:39 AM
Joined: May 2011 Posts: 6,142 Likes: 3 Connecticut Deadly Chakram Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Deadly Chakram Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: May 2011 Posts: 6,142 Likes: 3 Connecticut	Very interesting vignette! But I want more! I'd love to see what Clark says/does whilst under Sunday's hypnosis. What if he uses his powers? Yikes! Battle On, Deadly Chakram "Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent "One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon

Re: FDK: A Sunday Evening 1 / 1 bakasi #269042 02/17/16 07:46 PM
Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California groobie Kerth
groobie Kerth Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California	I agree with Deadly Chakram - what would happen if Clark used his powers while under hypnosis in front of a room full of people, including Lois? Would she jump on stage and pull him away, trying to cover for him? Would she and the audience think that whatever Clark is doing was just a magic trick, part of the act? You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie.

Re: FDK: A Sunday Evening 1 / 1 bakasi #269050 02/18/16 02:07 AM
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OP bakasi Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,628 Likes: 42 Germany	Thanks for your feedback, groobie and Deadly Chakram. I agree that the ensuing scene has a lot potential and could be a fun read. But personally I wanted to allow your imagination to run wild with what might happen. I don't think I'd be capable of using this scene to its full potential. But feel free to turn this into a challenge. I'd like to read what others can come up with. It's never too dark to be cool.

Re: FDK: A Sunday Evening 1 / 1 bakasi #269265 03/02/16 12:06 PM
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Shallowford Columnist S Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 739 Likes: 2 Michigan's thumb	That would definitely be worth the price of admission! Shallowford

Re: FDK: A Sunday Evening 1 / 1 bakasi #274083 03/10/17 09:25 AM
Joined: Jan 2009 Posts: 4,025 Birmingham, AL folc4evernaday Pulitzer
folc4evernaday Pulitzer Joined: Jan 2009 Posts: 4,025 Birmingham, AL	Quote "I forgot to mention you're utterly drunk." Lol. This one made me laugh. ~ Folc4evernaday Jodi Picoult - You might not write well every day, but you can always edit a bad page. You can't edit a blank page. https://loisclarktribute.com Subscribe on YouTube

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