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Nice twist =) And very funny delivery.


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I think the above about says it all. smile

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Haha that was clever and cute. I enjoyed that.


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clap Perfect. Nobody would be gunning for Clark and Lois more.

So, I know I'm reading too much into this... but let me work this out in my head. The first Wells brought the baby. The second took him away. And the third, well, realized that the outcome would be the same either way. Screwed either way, huh? Yep. It's impossible. clap Genius!


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Originally Posted by VirginiaR
So, I know I'm reading too much into this... but let me work this out in my head. The first Wells brought the baby. The second took him away. And the third, well, realized that the outcome would be the same either way. Screwed either way, huh? Yep. It's impossible. clap Genius!

Well, actually I thought more along the lines that in a world so good that even Tempus was no longer a villain, a few other people had to go stir crazy. blush

Thanks for your feedback,Lieta, Lynn, Mrs Luthor and Virginia

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Originally Posted by bakasi
Well, actually I thought more along the lines that in a world so good that even Tempus was no longer a villain, a few other people had to go stir crazy. blush
Okay, that works, too! Yep, I could see that happening. There's no such thing as a perfect world. Perhaps there's yet another Wells outside who hasn't knocked yet. wink


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What a wonderful, fun story! And a brilliant premise! clap lol hail


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Perhaps there's yet another Wells outside who hasn't knocked yet. wink


A scary thought. With Tempus in their home they will never have another moment of peace. Seems to me, that Tempus could win after all. This is screaming paradox. shock

Thanks for your feedback, Framework and cuidadora

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Ha! What a great ending clap!

I also liked how each Wells in turn tried to clean their glasses just a little bit better. Great detail to go along with the stress of the situation. And awesome dialogue between everyone smile.

Laura


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...two simple sentences--with so much meaning.

~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~

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