So wonderfully worth the wait
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Clark calling Lois 'Citizen' was hilarious
! Great job with the dialogue. I have to agree--Michel trying to be Superman was awesome
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Oh--and I also enjoyed how Clark's first instinct was for Michel to be 'Superman' and not 'Clark'. How Lois knows him (Clark) so well that he knows that tricking her would never work. It speaks very deeply to how much of a disguise Superman really is--and to how Clark is his real true self when he is out of the costume, in street clothes or a business suit, working and hanging out with Lois.
Looking forward to more,
Laura