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This is from Prologue part 1 -Thanksgiving 2015.

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Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks"

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Hello Ken!

It was good to read how Lois gathered the neighbors together and they all took turns providing meals for the Livingstones. She certainly has grown a great deal since her younger days. The neighborhood will benefit in the long run. Look how it has already started with Carol and Donna.

Poor Hattie! She cannot catch a break when it comes to Kam-El! Will see ever meet him? Will Amber ever stop rubbing her nose in her face about kissing him full on the lips? rotflol


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Hi Morgana,

Thanks for the FDK!

I decided that since I haven't posted in a while, there could be new readers that were not familiar with my characters so I am doing an extended prologue so that I can introduce them.

Yes,we are seeing the germinating of Utopia. As with any movement, it is starting off small, with the super family influencing their neighborhood.

Yes, it is a shame about Hattie. She just can't seem to catch a break when it comes to Kam-El, but when she finally does in Hattie Kaplin - Reporter the fireworks start.

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Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks"

My stories can be found here

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