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FDK: O Brother, Where Art Thou? (14-B / ???) #272772 11/21/16 04:39 PM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 3,060 Likes: 20 Florida Queen of the Capes OP Pulitzer
OP Queen of the Capes Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 3,060 Likes: 20 Florida	Story is HERE. I hope this part pleases. 'Sfunny, I had thought for sure that the chapter was almost perfectly written up in my head, and only needed to be put on the screen. Once I'd written it, however, I realized it was terrible and needed to be re-written. Several drafts later, here we are! One of these days, I may need to do a "deleted scenes" compilation, for all the gags I had to jettison for stupid reasons like "logic" and "story flow". <_< ~•~

Re: FDK: O Brother, Where Art Thou? (14-B / ???) Queen of the Capes #272793 11/23/16 01:13 AM
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VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	Originally Posted by Queen of the Capes One of these days, I may need to do a "deleted scenes" compilation, for all the gags I had to jettison for stupid reasons like "logic" and "story flow". <_< I know that feeling. Yea, that Clark saved Michel, but to what expense? What will Lois now think of Clark? Will she even remember? While Clark and Michel can communicate non-verbally, they don't do it well. Michel's trying to warn Clark and all Clark can think is that he wants a glass of water. Let's hope Michel's drugged state is quickly curable. Although, I can't see Michel's mom and dad to be very happy about the delivery of their son in this condition. They're going to lay in some heavy French resistance! /sorry, it was too tempting. I know it was horrible. / BTW, Queenie, you should see the outtakes from my FDK. LOL. I hope no one else was in Michel's lab when it blew, such as Suzanne! VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK: O Brother, Where Art Thou? (14-B / ???) Queen of the Capes #272902 12/04/16 07:31 PM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 3,060 Likes: 20 Florida Queen of the Capes OP Pulitzer
OP Queen of the Capes Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 3,060 Likes: 20 Florida	Hee, yeah, Virginia, they've still got some kinks to work out. Sorry the next part is taking so long; things have been very busy at work. Part 15 is underway, though! ~•~

Re: FDK: O Brother, Where Art Thou? (14-B / ???) Queen of the Capes #273120 12/25/16 06:16 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31	Hi Mary! Finally got some time Quote Clark's mouth went dry as Lois swayed toward him, dressed in a costume that revealed so much and yet promised so much more. Ooooh! I know that one! Quote You're not—” He broke off as something like a scream echoed through his head. “Michel!” LOIS: Well, that settles it. I can’t believe Cat was right about his interest in other men. I wonder if Clark will reimburse me the five bucks… Quote 'Michel, where are you?' he tried again, but still, there was only silence, darkness, and...tile?! Quote Michel didn't move. After a while, though, something slow and sleepy prodded at Clark's mind. He must have been drugged, Clark thought. Nice one. But I do hope Clark isn’t going to be in range when Michel feels better again and sees Suzanne. Hmm…This might just make for a reversal of the whole Revenge bit… Quote Water. Potassium. Clark turned back to Michel. The man was clearly trying to tell him that he needed medical care. Yes. Right. MICHEL: CLARK: /Holds his palm to Michel’s forehead./ No, you don’t seem to have a fever. Quote “that before...we met...my life was...uneventful?” To be fair, though, Suzanne was already poised and ready before they met. Hope you’ll have time for part 15 soon! Michael PS: I so know about outtakes ruining the flow. Would love to read them, though Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

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