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Story is HERE.

I hope this part pleases. smile 'Sfunny, I had thought for sure that the chapter was almost perfectly written up in my head, and only needed to be put on the screen. Once I'd written it, however, I realized it was terrible and needed to be re-written. Several drafts later, here we are!

One of these days, I may need to do a "deleted scenes" compilation, for all the gags I had to jettison for stupid reasons like "logic" and "story flow". <_<


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Originally Posted by Queen of the Capes
One of these days, I may need to do a "deleted scenes" compilation, for all the gags I had to jettison for stupid reasons like "logic" and "story flow". <_<
I know that feeling. lol

Yea, that Clark saved Michel, but to what expense? What will Lois now think of Clark? Will she even remember? While Clark and Michel can communicate non-verbally, they don't do it well. lol Michel's trying to warn Clark and all Clark can think is that he wants a glass of water. Let's hope Michel's drugged state is quickly curable. Although, I can't see Michel's mom and dad to be very happy about the delivery of their son in this condition. They're going to lay in some heavy French resistance! peep /sorry, it was too tempting. I know it was horrible. blush / BTW, Queenie, you should see the outtakes from my FDK. LOL.

I hope no one else was in Michel's lab when it blew, such as Suzanne!


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Hee, yeah, Virginia, they've still got some kinks to work out. smile Sorry the next part is taking so long; things have been very busy at work. Part 15 is underway, though!


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Hi Mary! Finally got some time hyper
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Clark's mouth went dry as Lois swayed toward him, dressed in a costume that revealed so much and yet promised so much more.
Ooooh! I know that one!

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You're not—” He broke off as something like a scream echoed through his head. “Michel!”
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LOIS: mad Well, *that* settles it. I can’t believe Cat was right about his interest in other men. I wonder if Clark will reimburse me the five bucks…

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'Michel, where are you?' he tried again, but still, there was only silence, darkness, and...tile?!
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Michel didn't move. After a while, though, something slow and sleepy prodded at Clark's mind. He must have been drugged, Clark thought.
Nice one. But I do hope Clark isn’t going to be in range when Michel feels better again and sees Suzanne. Hmm…This might just make for a reversal of the whole Revenge bit…

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Water.

Potassium.

Clark turned back to Michel. The man was clearly trying to tell him that he needed medical care.
Yes. Right.
MICHEL: [Linked Image]
CLARK: /Holds his palm to Michel’s forehead./ No, you don’t seem to have a fever.

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“that before...we met...my life was...uneventful?”
laugh To be fair, though, Suzanne was already poised and ready before they met.

Hope you’ll have time for part 15 soon!

wave Michael

PS: I so know about outtakes ruining the flow. Would love to read them, though smile1


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