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FDK: Airport - Part 30 of 32 #273100 12/23/16 06:41 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,784 Likes: 28 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana OP Pulitzer
OP Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,784 Likes: 28 Somewhere on the East Coast	Showdown! Everything comes together in this action packed chapter! Plus we see a couple of mysterious 'visitors' finally take center stage to save Clark's secret. I have to thank Ken Janney for the action sequence, his extensive medical and ordnance knowledge made everything shine! Last edited by Morgana; 12/23/16 06:42 AM. Reason: Additional comments Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Airport - Part 30 of 32 Morgana #273102 12/23/16 11:31 PM
Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 2,020 Portland, Oregon, USA F Framework4 Kerth
Framework4 Kerth F Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 2,020 Portland, Oregon, USA	Delightful! Framework4

Re: FDK: Airport - Part 30 of 32 Morgana #273119 12/25/16 03:54 AM
Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California groobie Kerth
groobie Kerth Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California	Gosh, I hope all of that drama doesn't affect attendance for the Age of Napoleon exhibit! Great action, and nice shout outs to some minor characters from the show (Calvin is a low-life in every universe!) I very much hope that Clark takes the first chance they have alone to tell Lois the truth, because if he continues to hide the secret after all of that drama, she will be rightly angry when she eventually finds out. You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie.

Re: FDK: Airport - Part 30 of 32 Morgana #273122 12/25/16 07:34 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,784 Likes: 28 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana OP Pulitzer
OP Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,784 Likes: 28 Somewhere on the East Coast	Framework4 Quote Delightful The entire part made you smile? Glad to know! Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Airport - Part 30 of 32 Morgana #273126 12/25/16 03:01 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,784 Likes: 28 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana OP Pulitzer
OP Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,784 Likes: 28 Somewhere on the East Coast	Groobie Quote Gosh, I hope all of that drama doesn't affect attendance for the Age of Napoleon exhibit! Hmmm, considering none of the exhibits were damaged when Tempus was shooting up the place it's highly doubtful. Quote Great action, and nice shout outs to some minor characters from the show (Calvin is a low-life in every universe!) The action writing is all Ken's writing, that is an area I am seriously lacking in! I totally agree with you, Calvin is a real jerk in any universe, but at least he stayed at his janitorial job at the museum for awhile. But he was still a creep. I made Elise a lot more assertive in that she left him before making the mistake of marrying the louse. Quote I very much hope that Clark takes the first chance they have alone to tell Lois the truth, because if he continues to hide the secret after all of that drama, she will be rightly angry when she eventually finds out. Clark will try, but his timing could not be worse! Next part will be up this week and then the grand finale! Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Airport - Part 30 of 32 Morgana #273135 12/26/16 12:01 PM
Joined: Jul 2014 Posts: 917 Likes: 2 East Coast USA cuidadora Features Writer
cuidadora Features Writer Joined: Jul 2014 Posts: 917 Likes: 2 East Coast USA	Wow! What an action packed showdown chapter. Glad to see Tempus didn't succeed completely in his plan. He did expose Daae and Arianna's plotting, so that part was successful Hopefully everyone with survive their wounds relatively unscathed. Or maybe their brush with their own mortality turns Daae and Luthor into good guys... Or not! Would be nice if Jack's pictures include photographic proof that Superman and Clark are two separate people. That would help him keep his secret identity both currently and in the future after CJ and Wanda return to their universe. Have Clark's superpowers already returned? Sounds like his enhanced vision was working pretty fast. I always wondered if Clark would be affected differently by kryptonite from another universe. Originally Posted by groobie I very much hope that Clark takes the first chance they have alone to tell Lois the truth, because if he continues to hide the secret after all of that drama, she will be rightly angry when she eventually finds out. Originally Posted by Morgana Clark will try, but his timing could not be worse! Apparently no matter what the universe, poor Clark just can't get a break in his timing! Looking forward to the next installments! Last edited by cuidadora; 12/26/16 12:50 PM. Reason: typos Cuidadora "Honey, we didn't care if you were a Russian or a Martian... You were ours... and we weren't giving you to anybody." ~ Martha in Strange Visitor "A love that risks nothing is worth nothing." ~ Jonathan in Big Girls Don't Fly

Re: FDK: Airport - Part 30 of 32 Morgana #273138 12/26/16 09:11 PM
Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 2,445 London, England Marcus Rowland Kerth
Marcus Rowland Kerth Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 2,445 London, England	Tempus really messed up with the kryptonite - did he simply not get close enough, or was there some other factor making the stuff less effective? Marcus L. Rowland Forgotten Futures, The Scientific Romance Role Playing Game

Re: FDK: Airport - Part 30 of 32 Morgana #273155 12/27/16 09:28 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,784 Likes: 28 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana OP Pulitzer
OP Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,784 Likes: 28 Somewhere on the East Coast	Ciudadoro Quote Glad to see Tempus didn't succeed completely in his plan. He did expose Daae and Arianna's plotting, so that part was successful Hopefully everyone with survive their wounds relatively unscathed. Or maybe their brush with their own mortality turns Daae and Luthor into good guys... goofy Or not! Daae and Luthor learn a lesson and appreciate their mortality? Highly unlikely! Quote Would be nice if Jack's pictures include photographic proof that Superman and Clark are two separate people. That would help him keep his secret identity both currently and in the future after CJ and Wanda return to their universe. A LOT of reporters and society folk saw Clark and Superman (CJ) standing side by side before and after the arrest of Tempus. The pictures Jack shot will solidly confirm that they are two very different people. Yay Jack! Last edited by Morgana; 12/29/16 11:04 PM. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Airport - Part 30 of 32 Morgana #273181 12/29/16 11:00 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,784 Likes: 28 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana OP Pulitzer
OP Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,784 Likes: 28 Somewhere on the East Coast	Marcus Quote Tempus really messed up with the kryptonite - did he simply not get close enough, or was there some other factor making the stuff less effective? Nope. That was me playing with canon! Hope you like H.G's explanation in Part thirty-one. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

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