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FDK- Changing the Game (rewrite) 1/1 #275917 06/22/17 03:22 AM
Joined: Oct 2013 Posts: 825 Toowoomba, Australia N NostalgiaKick OP Features Writer
OP NostalgiaKick Features Writer N Joined: Oct 2013 Posts: 825 Toowoomba, Australia	Feedback folder "It means never having to play it cool about how much you like something. It's basically a license to proudly emote on a somewhat childish level rather than behave like a supposed adult. Being a geek is extremely liberating."- Simon Pegg

Re: FDK- Changing the Game (rewrite) 1/1 NostalgiaKick #275943 06/23/17 03:17 AM
Joined: Jun 2011 Posts: 2,131 California Mouserocks Kerth
Mouserocks Kerth Joined: Jun 2011 Posts: 2,131 California	I love this! I did read the originals before the Kerths, but I don't remember exactly... I'll have to hit them again anyways. Independent of that, this was very clear and well-written. Lois knowing he's Superman, the Kerth, the fall of Luthor. A lot was encapsulated in this short span of time. I particularly like the detail of Clark leaving his door unlocked-- you'd think he was raised in a barn or something. Great story! Nothing spoils a good story like the arrival of an eye witness. --Mark Twain

Re: FDK- Changing the Game (rewrite) 1/1 NostalgiaKick #275949 06/23/17 12:53 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,831 Likes: 42 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,831 Likes: 42 Somewhere on the East Coast	This version reads much smoother! Besides I find it highly amusing that Lois takes charge and kisses him first. Sometimes a lady just has to take the bull by the horns! Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK- Changing the Game (rewrite) 1/1 NostalgiaKick #275952 06/23/17 05:19 PM
Joined: Jan 2009 Posts: 4,025 Birmingham, AL folc4evernaday Pulitzer
folc4evernaday Pulitzer Joined: Jan 2009 Posts: 4,025 Birmingham, AL	Awwww, you used my suggestion for Lois. Yay! I love this. Seriously awesome! ~ Folc4evernaday Jodi Picoult - You might not write well every day, but you can always edit a bad page. You can't edit a blank page. https://loisclarktribute.com Subscribe on YouTube

Re: FDK- Changing the Game (rewrite) 1/1 NostalgiaKick #275958 06/23/17 08:47 PM
Joined: May 2011 Posts: 6,142 Likes: 3 Connecticut Deadly Chakram Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Deadly Chakram Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: May 2011 Posts: 6,142 Likes: 3 Connecticut	Love it! Lois grabbing him for the kiss is SO like her! And the part about her saying she wants all of him? swoon! I LOVE how well you cram so much into such short little ficlets - it's definitely a talent that I envy! Battle On, Deadly Chakram "Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent "One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon

Re: FDK- Changing the Game (rewrite) 1/1 NostalgiaKick #275961 06/23/17 09:31 PM
Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,702 Canada J jackiek Merriwether
jackiek Merriwether J Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,702 Canada	Aww I love it! Go Lois! Superman: I hear you've been looking for me. Lois: All my life.

Re: FDK- Changing the Game (rewrite) 1/1 NostalgiaKick #275964 06/24/17 08:14 AM
Joined: Oct 2013 Posts: 825 Toowoomba, Australia N NostalgiaKick OP Features Writer
OP NostalgiaKick Features Writer N Joined: Oct 2013 Posts: 825 Toowoomba, Australia	Just realised I haven't replied to any of you! Mouse- thank you! Do me a favour and forget about the original version of this though It's the one story I've posted that I honestly dislike. This one actually feels good. Morgana- yup, sometimes she's just gotta take charge! Folc- thank you so much for your help! DC- I could just picture Lois getting frustrated with him enough to do this lol. Also, I envy your ability to weave such complex and interesting plots! Jackie- thank you! Thanks everyone. As I said in my author's note, I was truly unhappy with the original version of this fic. I love that you've all enjoyed the rewrite so much more "It means never having to play it cool about how much you like something. It's basically a license to proudly emote on a somewhat childish level rather than behave like a supposed adult. Being a geek is extremely liberating."- Simon Pegg

Re: FDK- Changing the Game (rewrite) 1/1 NostalgiaKick #276393 07/18/17 04:02 PM
Joined: Jul 2017 Posts: 574 Likes: 14 Southern Pines, NC CarrieRene Columnist
CarrieRene Columnist Joined: Jul 2017 Posts: 574 Likes: 14 Southern Pines, NC	I'm trying to go back from the beginning and read some shorter fics and this is the first one I came upon. I love how Lois takes charge (something I have had to do before). I adore how she knew who he is and still makes the first move and yet they don't take it much further. Loved it. I didn't read the previous version and I'm glad because I love this version.

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