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Conclusion to Guy Rule Number One. What happened on Lois and Clark's date? How did Lois handle the revelation? How did Clark? What ever happened to Mayson Drake?
So many questions answered in the second installment of the "Rules" series.
Hope you guys enjoy this one.
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Veggie burgers are not as bad as Lois makes them seem. I loved how Martha calls Clark out for not telling Lois.
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Looking forward to the reveal and Lois's reaction. I love the way you've portrayed Martha and Jonathan here, especially their blunt speech about feelings that both Clark and Lois would almost rather die than talk about.
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Veggie burgers are not as bad as Lois makes them seem. I loved how Martha calls Clark out for not telling Lois. Yeah, my mom's vegetarian so I've had some good and some bad veggie burgers. Depends on who makes them. Martha and Jonathan do a pretty good job of calling Clark out on his goofs. I figured this wouldn't be an exception. Looking forward to the reveal and Lois's reaction. I love the way you've portrayed Martha and Jonathan here, especially their blunt speech about feelings that both Clark and Lois would almost rather die than talk about. Thanks BJ. This one's kinda taken on a life of it's own. I hope you all enjoy the date and reveal. I just posted it.
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Wow! What a date! You did a fantastic job on that date and the reveal. Fantastic.
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Still loving that date! Man, Clark needs to teach classes on how to throw first dates! *swoon* Love the reveal. But Lois is taking it almost too well. I look forward to the inevitable eruption of Mount Lane. 
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"Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent
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Time spent in the Kent family kitchen is always good!
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Love it! Nice tie in to TOGOM. Hopefully Clark doesn't have to "play dead" this time around. Jimmy, dude, stop sticking your foot into your mouth. She's not Mad Dog Lane because she's gentle on people.
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“My files. My collections….The entire collection on Bonnie and Clyde, Al Pacino, and his gang….gone. My dad spent his whole life collecting this stuff.” Do you mean Al Capone?
"Oh, you can’t help that," said the Cat: "we’re all mad here. I’m mad. You’re mad."
"How do you know I’m mad?" said Alice.
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“My files. My collections….The entire collection on Bonnie and Clyde, Al Pacino, and his gang….gone. My dad spent his whole life collecting this stuff.” Do you mean Al Capone? Haha! Yes, sorry brain fried this weekend. 
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Love it! Nice tie in to TOGOM. Hopefully Clark doesn't have to "play dead" this time around. Jimmy, dude, stop sticking your foot into your mouth. She's not Mad Dog Lane because she's gentle on people. Haha yes there will be some twists with this one. No, I"m not giving anything away. Jimmy always finds a way to open mouth and insert foot, doesn't he?
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Bobby sighting! Love it when Bobby shows up and offers some of his wisdom. Now I'm hungry for Chicago pizza and Greek food! Can't wait for more.
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Love how close they are getting, and how well Lois is adapting to Clark being Superman. Good ol' Bobby knows everything. LOL! Having fun reading this!
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Bobby sighting! Love it when Bobby shows up and offers some of his wisdom. Now I'm hungry for Chicago pizza and Greek food! Can't wait for more. Clark always has a way of doing that to us, doesn't he? Darn superpowers and his ability to fly anywhere and bring back exotic cuisine. I love Bobby! He's one of my favorites in the reoccurring roles. Love how close they are getting, and how well Lois is adapting to Clark being Superman. Good ol' Bobby knows everything. LOL! Having fun reading this! Well, the difference here is the way he told her and the fact that she didn't have to figure it out for herself. It's not after they're dating it's right at the beginning so the budding romance is built on truth --not lies. I believe that has a lot to do with her reaction here. I'm not a fan of Lois sulking for weeks on end about him lying to her or Clark being a dummy and not telling her everything before they started dating. She'd already proven she could be trusted. She was already associated with Superman in the public eye. There was no excuse for continuing to lie to her.  JMO Bobby knows all! LOL! Gotta love him and his pearls of wisdom. More Bobby to come 
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Chapter 2
Making out in the conference room? That is good, but not good! Hey guys, I thought the relationship was going to be quiet for awhile?
Nope. Poor Mayson never had a chance!
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Chapter 2
Making out in the conference room? That is good, but not good! Hey guys, I thought the relationship was going to be quiet for awhile?
Nope. Poor Mayson never had a chance! Haha! I wouldn't call it making out though. Just a few....heated kisses. lol There's a definite shift in the relationship that they both feel. No, Mayson never had a chance.
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Clark, you're being an overprotective jerk again! Seriously, someone slap him upside the head with a Kryptonite studded baseball bat!  Jokes aside, I like how it's going. Clark needs to chill a bit, but Lois is putting him right in his place. Go, Lois! Mayson is going to be a bit of a witch, isn't she?
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That Madonna reference. Haha. And Clark being overprotective. Sounds like trouble with Mayson around.
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That Madonna reference. Haha. And Clark being overprotective. Sounds like trouble with Mayson around. Yeah, I can't claim the first reference. That was the script. The second I thought would just be funny to throw in given Sammy thought Lois should be Madonna. Glad you liked it.
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Clark, you're being an overprotective jerk again! Seriously, someone slap him upside the head with a Kryptonite studded baseball bat! laugh
Jokes aside, I like how it's going. Clark needs to chill a bit, but Lois is putting him right in his place. Go, Lois!
Mayson is going to be a bit of a witch, isn't she? Vicki, Clark IS an overprotective dolt sometimes. Especially when it comes to the people he cares about. He's also a little paranoid with the whole secret identity. But yeah, if you want to smack him upside the head then I did my job because that was the goal in this scene. Notice how Lois totally called him out and pointed out that people were staring?? Yeah, she doesn't play. Mayson is totally going to be a bit of a witch. You'll find out why pretty soon.
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