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#279764 03/31/18 11:06 PM
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Thank you for the detailed warning.


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This is the first time I've ever seen a story post that consisted entirely of warning. I second Framework4's thanks. Normally I try to read all of your short or relatively short stories, but I am going to be giving this one a pass.

Thanks again,
Lynn

p.s., You got me. That's what I get for not reading past the first one-and-a-half sentences. blush After seeing some other feedback, I went on to read the rest and realized what was happening. Brava! lol clap

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Well... Thank you for your very detailed warning teeming with spoiler alerts. This said, I'm afraid I'll decline reading any more of your --without doubt wonderfully crafted and lovingly written-- fic.

Well done! I was in the beginning of the second paragraphs when it clicked!
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Happy April Fool's Day Queenie! Nicely played

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My main question is what you're going to do with the other three chapters. April 1st is only one day long.

I'm told that one picture says a thousand words, so:

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One more thing:

"Hello, Dolly!"?


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I was like, well okaaayy, but I'd be very impressed with an author and a beta that were good enough to pull off a gfic bdsm scene... And then it just kept going and going and going... And then I realized oh wait clap brava indeed! You had me going there.


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Hi Mary!

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All In The Notes (1/4)
Ooooh, a four-parter! *buckles in*
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Quite the into blob…

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so I realize I'm taking a big risk by trying to present an alternative to the canon pairing,
Terry this that one with his Road-Trilogy to great success.

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I'm also aware that slash-fic, yuri, and homoeroticism in general are not everyone's cup of tea, though I tried to keep the Bruce/Clark scenes tasteful
Well…it wouldn’t be the first one.

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, and the “incident” between Lois Lane and Cat Grant is kept entirely “off-camera”.
/eyebrows raise significantly*

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My only concern is that the fetish-play chapter might still be a little too spicy for the gfic side of the boards
Oh, so it’s a continuation of that one vignette from a couple of months ago?

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and since Batman's discovery of bondage and the furry fandom is in fact integral to the plot,
To be fair, how else would you explain his fascination with Catwoman?
SELINA: *MEOWWWWW!* mad

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Also, some of you might feel that it's too far out of character for Lois to participate in a three-way
Lois, Clark, and Superman?

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but I hope I did a good enough job of showing her reasoning and motivations in order to make it believable.
LOIS: He already mentioned Clark *and* Superman. Why do you make such a fuzz?

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I'd also like to mention that I'm well aware that real-life Hari Krishnas do not generally engage in volcanic human sacrifice
Huh? Is that a Temple of Doom crossover?

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so Ralph's “expose” should be taken with a large grain of salt,
Oh, just a reason for Ralph to see the DP’s HR counselor. Or for her to need counseling herself.

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and I hope the new character introduced in the last chapter helps to clear up any remaining misconceptions that I might have inadvertently caused.
MXY: wave

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Also, there's a huge WHAM warning for this story, and I apologize deeply to any fans of Cyborg and Krypto the Superdog.
So, Old Yeller, too? Those parts are going to be quite longish, huh?

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up until the scene where Hippolyta and Wonder Woman enter Mel's Diner
Wait, are they *eating* Krypto?

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Or at all.
So, the first part of the story contains only the notes?

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Happy April First.
laugh I see. /checks calendar/ [Linked Image]

To be fair, between last year’s news stories and ever more searched stories published right after March 31st, things become rather difficult to distinguish.

Also, the title’s a great touch. And I *do* mean the whole title. clap

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Hi, guys! wave

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My main question is what you're going to do with the other three chapters

The "1/4" is actually a subtle nod to how dates are written in Europe/Canada: Day/Month/Year = 1/4/2018 wink

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Also, the title’s a great touch. And I *do* mean the whole title

So glad you picked up on that! laugh


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Bwhahahahahaha! You totally got me! *wipes away tears*

I'm not one to shy away from tasteful slash-fic (and Clark/Bruce sounds like it could open up a world of interesting fun), so I actually would have read such a tale.

Dang, you totally just won the April Fools war this year. laugh


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and this story has not been written for profit.

Or at all.

Bwaaaahaaaahaaaahaaaahaaaahaaaa!!!!!
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1/4 - OMG, so clever! What happened to Krypto??!! mecry G-rated slash fic with threeways. lol I never say "I could quote the whole story", but, seriously, I could quote the whole story. I am rolling in tears! notworthy

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