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Maybe not what the challenge was meant to be, but my muse is, apparently, inspired by the fact that my horticulture skills are only slightly more impressive than Lois'. 
Battle On,
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"Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent
"One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon
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Oh DC, it fits perfectly. My first thought was Lois and her lack of cooking skills but figured Clark would assure her that he would do the cooking, then thought Lois and her plant killing skills but could not figure out how that would stop Clark from marrying her and then staggered to the finish (punch) line!
Beautiful!!
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Last edited by Mike M; 05/10/18 10:18 PM.
Create all the happiness you are able to create.
Remove all the misery you are able to remove.
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 Perfect! Great punch line!
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Oh DC, it fits perfectly. My first thought was Lois and her lack of cooking skills but figured Clark would assure her that he would do the cooking, then thought Lois and her plant killing skills but could not figure out how that would stop Clark from marrying her and then staggered to the finish (punch) line!
Beautiful!!
Mike Thanks, Mike! Funny, the subject of Lois' cooking skills came up in the chat after I posted this. Seeing my poor collection of half-dead plants this morning inspired this. Glad the misdirections worked! Thanks for reading!
Battle On,
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Perfect! Great punch line! Hahaha, thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!
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"One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon
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There was a split second at the end where I genuinely thought Martha could be a serial killer, and in that moment I saw the heart of darkness... And then I died laughing, because it was hilarious and of course Martha is a plant killer! Poetic too. Boys do tend to marry their Mama's. Fantastic job!
Nothing spoils a good story like the arrival of an eye witness.
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Cute. As someone with a black thumb, I can relate
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That was great! The misdirection, the confusion and uncertainty over the identities of these two, the contrast of Jonathan the plant-grower loving Martha the plant-killer, cooker, and eater - excellent! Your muses are taunting mine now, and I'm not sure mine will accept this state of affairs. I may have to finish that Halloween-type story just to get them out of my head.
Keep writing! You are one of the best!
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Martha, a plant killer? When I read this I fell out of my chair with laughter. Good way to start the weekend. Thanks DC!
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A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.
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 Loved it! A thousand scenarios passed through my mind... except yours! Great twist and story both hilarious and cute. Bravo!
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Hahaha, that was absolutely hilarious. While I was reading I thought about who that killer could be, I absolutely didn't see that coming.
Great work.
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There was a split second at the end where I genuinely thought Martha could be a serial killer, and in that moment I saw the heart of darkness... And then I died laughing, because it was hilarious and of course Martha is a plant killer! Poetic too. Boys do tend to marry their Mama's. Fantastic job! Haha! Thanks, Mouse! Glad the misdirection worked. Although, that would be a fun thought. Martha is a killer...and also Batman's mom. She hired someone to kill her husband and faked her death. She moved to Smallville to stay under the radar and married Jonathan...Ooooh....Alt U ALL the way! She secretly trains Clark to use his powers for evil...Mwhahahaha!
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Cute. As someone with a black thumb, I can relate My mom and I both have black thumbs. My mom has but to LOOK at a plant and it dies. I'm only slightly better. Glad you liked the story!
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That was great! The misdirection, the confusion and uncertainty over the identities of these two, the contrast of Jonathan the plant-grower loving Martha the plant-killer, cooker, and eater - excellent! Your muses are taunting mine now, and I'm not sure mine will accept this state of affairs. I may have to finish that Halloween-type story just to get them out of my head.
Keep writing! You are one of the best! Wow! Thanks for the high praise, Terry! Glad I could keep up the mystique for you. I'll be quite pleased if my muse gives yours a little shove. All muses need a good kick to the rear-end every once in a while. I do hope yours finishes your fic for you!
Battle On,
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Martha, a plant killer? When I read this I fell out of my chair with laughter. Good way to start the weekend. Thanks DC! Haha! Glad I could give you a laugh! Thanks for reading, Morgana!
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Loved it! A thousand scenarios passed through my mind... except yours! Great twist and story both hilarious and cute. Bravo! Haha! Glad it didn't so I could catch you by surprise! Thanks for reading!
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Hahaha, that was absolutely hilarious. While I was reading I thought about who that killer could be, I absolutely didn't see that coming.
Great work. Glad you liked it! It was such a fun quote that I knew I had to find a way to make a fic work for it.
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This was amazing, I spent the whole story  and then at the end
"HUMANS NEED FANTASY TO BE HUMAN. TO BE THE PLACE WHERE THE FALLING ANGEL MEETS THE RISING APE." -Terry Pratchett, Hogfather
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Haha, yay! Thanks for reading it!
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