Omg! Sorry I'm so late to commenting on this one (especially seeing as I requested it...). Computer died with half a thread's worth of FDK written up and I kept telling myself I'd wait till my screen got fixed... but now it's been forever and a day so I'm just replying now!
Another great chapter! The scene with Laura and her in laws was great, especially the fact that Christy couldn't wrap her mind around it and Tom was just matter of fact about it.
had me laughing. I also thought the bonding between Cruz and Jon was sweet-- talking about discovering his father was Superman. Very cute. Your characters are so personable, it makes them very easy to relate to.
Wish I had more time today, but hopefully you'll post another chapter soon! Can't wait to see where this all leads.