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All right! Been a very long time weekend here, and I don't anticipate things slowing down, so I considered waiting a week to post this but here we go again! In case you haven't noticed, these "act breaks" are somewhat arbitrary, just a way to sort out the comments and avoid any future spoilers (if you're clicking on act 5 comments, you darn well should be into act 5 )

Anywho. Comments below for Act 3: Poison Kiss! Hope you're still enjoying Chapter 35 is ready to read!

Forgot to post the link to the new chapter yesterday... Chapter 36 is up! Enjoy!

What? Mouse is posting before ten in the morning? Happy Monday! Here's chapter 37 for your reading pleasure!

Midnight counts! Happy Wednesday, and here's Chapter 38 ! Enjoy!

I still find it weird that 'Jimmy' is referred to as 'James' in this twisted Universe you've created Mouse.

Nice to see somethings don't change though. Perry is still protective of Lois and given what we know about Mr. Kent I don't blame him one bit.

LOL at Bobby being referred to as 'Robert'

Okay that's all I've got time for right now. Thought I'd drop a line since ACT 3 seemed lonely for FDK.

Haha, thanks! I liked playing around with the secondary characters a bit, especially Jimmy and Bobby. Little more of a blank slate to work with Bobby though, so it was fun. Thanks for the feedback!

Chapter 39 is up now! Have a happy Monday everyone!

Awww, SuperSneak still has a soft spot for orphans. But wait, who's behind the experiments if it's not him? And EW LEX NO, is he seriously planning to roofie Lois?!

I hope she jumps Clark right in front of him (although I'm not sure that would be such a good idea with this Clark >.> )

Okay, I"m sorry E I literally choked on my drink reading this. I'm fine by the way but lol. The mental image is there forever. But yeah that would be a sweet revenge for Luthor's nefarious plans. Sicko.

Yeah, Clark has a hard time with letting things go, so the orphan thing is gonna stick with him a while.


So many questions. Who is behind the smart kids debacle? And Lex is slowly but surely spiraling out of control. If he had a way to keep Lois his forever, he's darn well gonna try.

Hehehe, I gotta say, if Lex was standing right there, Clark would probably go for it, ask questions later.


Hahaha that's great! Poor Val

Thanks for all your comments! Chapter 40 is up and ready to read! Enjoy! Questions will be answered soon.

Awww, big bad evil dark Clark has a soft spot. Nice description of our entrepreneur, ruthless Clark Kent's place. Sounds intriguing.

I see Lois is getting pulled in deeper here. So she doesn't like people telling her what to do and she keeps running toward dark Clark...

Lex: Noooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Meanwhile

Lois: I make my own decisions! **jumps dark Clark's bones**
Clark: You're now in charge of all the decision making from now until eternity...

**renames organization**

Lex: I don't know what you're talking about officer. I don't own anything called LL Enterprises.

Lois and Dark Clark: **Evil Laugh**

Lex: Somebody save me. I know I'm basically a doormat with rapist tendencies and I have a severe drinking problem but someone take pity on me please!!

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Lex: **wakes up from nightmare** It's time to up the game.

Hahahaha! thanks for the laugh Val! I can neither confirm nor deny how accurate this is. Lex is definitely not someone worth pitying though

Chapter 41 is up now! Happy Monday!

I'm glad my random thoughts could put a smile on your face Mouse.

Happy Wednesday! Chapter 42 is up and ready to read! Hope you enjoy the smooches.

Happy Monday! Chapter 43 is up and ready to read!

Oh noooo! Dark Clark is going to finally get his Lois fix. Clark's past might be catching up with him. Nice part!

Hehehe. More to come on that front... Today in fact! Chapter 44 is up and ready to read!

Ohhhhh, this can't end good...or can it

Happy Monday! Here's today's chapter only a little late... Been a crazy week or two, so I considered taking a week hiatus, but I think I'm gonna save it for next week. So for now, here's chapter 45! Enjoy!

Hey Mouse!

Oh, wow, I almost feel bad for our little dark Clark here. All those hormones and urges raging and that pesky little conscience peeks up and ruins it all.

I'm guessing there will be hell to pay when that stuff wears off. Poor Lucy though. Hope someone can get to her before Nigel digs himself any deeper than he already is.

Hell to pay, indeed. Lucy's fate will change shortly, and Nigel's fate... Well, I can't give all away, can I?

Chapter 46 is up and ready to read!

Side note: I normally take a week break between Acts, but just this once I'm going to have to take it early. Sad to say, you're going to have to wait till Monday, October 8th to read how it all turns out! There's a lot going on IRL, and it's going to take a bit to get settled down again. I'll resume my usual posting schedule after that. I might be pretty silent here on the boards too until things get settled.

See you in a week and a half! And enjoy! Hope I didn't leave you on too bad a cliffhanger ( and to think, I could have ended it with Lois asking Clark to make love to her that would have been too evil).