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Latest morsel is Here.

This was originally meant to be the second half of the previous chapter, but I got tired of all the 'A and B' shennanigans and didn't want to risk just editing the previous post to suddenly be longer, since FoLCs might miss the update. So, here we are. I hope y'all enjoy, and I'll be getting to work on the next *actual* chapter. smile


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Yay! I'll take any and all morsels I can get! I'm still a little suspicious of who is who, but I think the scene with his parents was very well done. I was mad at them after they didn't want Clark and Michel hanging out, so this made me feel much better about them. The "teleporting" to get the soup, and his father saying it was enough were both very sweet moments.

I am waiting for Susanne to finally pony up and ask him straight out if he's Superman, but it'll probably have to wait until this whole memory thing clears up. Unless you want to be evil...

Another good chapter (even if it's short goofy we take what the muse will give!). Can't wait for more!


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Hi Mary!

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“I don't think that's really necessary...” he began, but she had already teleported into the kitchen and now returned with a steaming bowl that she thrust into his hands.
Looky there, they are *all* aliens wink Or X-Men.

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I don't know who you two are, except that Susanne said you're my parents, and I'm not sure who she is either.
Well, she didn’t stay to spend the night, so apparently he can rule out ‘girlfriend’.

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The man placed a hand on his shoulder. “It's enough.”
Oh boy.

MICHEL: So, I take this rock and drag it across the paper to leave words on it?
SUSANNE: huh

CLARK: The bank robbers couldn’t have fled through the floor and then released it. The bedrock just isn’t stable enough for a tunnel.
LOIS: confused

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