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Aww! Very sweet! Clark saving her from a brief tumble so soon after being rescued by Superman probably would have her drawing some conclusions. I also like how you had Lois handle it. Good reveal! Excited to see which episode you do next! 
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The pieces showed her the whole puzzle the moment that her mind went to the time that Clark had arrived at the daily planet and the moment Superman had arrived. It all fitted. She was going to keep quiet for now. This is the reason why Lois Lane is the Daily Planet's Ace Investigative Reporter! She followed the clues and reached the proper conclusion. It's great that she does not have a temper tantrum and demands to know why Clark did not inform her about his other job. Slowly, but surely she lets him know what evidence there is. Nicely done reveal Lady TPower! I look forward to more of this story. 
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Awww. I love the sweet little moments of them drinking tea on the couch, talking about their childhoods. Clark telling her he was adopted was a very nice moment.
Looking forward to more!
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when does partnership become friendship, friendship trust, and
trust become love: in perfect moments such as these.
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Clark startled but turned around to find the woman that brought the fire in his heart, only she didn't know it. His secret was out but this wasn't the time nor the place to answer her questions. Fire in his heart? Yup that sounds like Clark. Thanks so much for this great little story to read during a cold and dreary week! 
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Clark startled but turned around to find the woman that brought the fire in his heart, only she didn't know it. His secret was out but this wasn't the time nor the place to answer her questions. Fire in his heart? Yup that sounds like Clark. Thanks so much for this great little story to read during a cold and dreary week! thank you for the comment :-)
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Ah Vatman...yes, this certainly would have been an opportunity for Clark to be honest, and a rather obvious scene for Lois to have concluded the truth. I liked how Clark's sweet kiss was the key to helping Lois fit all of the puzzle pieces together. Good job!
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Ah Vatman...yes, this certainly would have been an opportunity for Clark to be honest, and a rather obvious scene for Lois to have concluded the truth. I liked how Clark's sweet kiss was the key to helping Lois fit all of the puzzle pieces together. Good job!
Susan, who misses Barry deeply, but is sure that he loves his life with Wanda Thnx for your amazing comment. Yeah, it's a different but obvious way to reveal himself.
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I always like fics that go the honest route. There's just something about them that makes me get all bubbly inside. On to next chapter 
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I always like fics that go the honest route. There's just something about them that makes me get all bubbly inside. On to next chapter thank you for your comment. I love doing reveal stories and some episodes give some very good opportunities
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