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Enjoy!

another great chapter, I loved the comparison Clark used. good job looking forward to the next chapter

Another excellent chapter!

Wow, you definitely have the chilling introduction to this chapter nailed!

His descriptions of how it feels be chained by that collar, both in a previous chapter to Lois and to Bruce in this one, paint vivid pictures with words. And his frustration seems to be moderating. Perhaps he's maturing, away from Lex's reach? [Hey, I can hope!]

Looking forward to the next installment.

Thank you! Having Clark compare his life to others/his life now to that under Lex was fun and felt like a nice way to start the slow thaw of his blackened soul. Thanks for reading!

Thanks, cuidadora!

I love that you loved the beginning. It was just so creepy and so Lex that I had to torment Clark a little bit with throwing it in. I'm also glad you liked the descriptions of his feelings about the collar. I figure it's responsible for most of his paranoid mental state and mostly responsible for him being a major jerk. That, and having only Lex as a "role model" (and that was painful to string those words together).

Clark is starting to come around a bit. He's away from Lex and realizing how Lex is the bad guy in this situation, much more than Bruce is. Bruce is a saving force in a way (at least he hasn't tried to kill Clark yet) but having Lois beginning to believe what he's saying and not lashing out at him as much is also a major factor. Our dear assassin doesn't understand love, but he's getting an education on how it can change a heart! Even if he doesn't quite realize it.

Thanks for reading!

Okay, I stored up a few chapters worth of comments for one go.

Chapter 7

Who’s the woman?? Is it Lois?? So glad I don't have to wait to find out!

Chapter 8

Did not see that coming.

Chapter 9

Ooh, interesting interaction between Lois and Clark (for the first time I don’t like his name… its dirty in this story)

Chapter 10

Hahahaha

Aww, poor Clark.

Chapter 11

Securitized? Did you mean scrutinize? This is the second time I've seen it. Pretty sure securitize is some financial term.

Finally, some change in Clark (still with the dirty name)

Chapter 12

I really like how none of this has been from Lois’s POV. But its still kind of obvious what must be going through her head. It would ruin it somehow (hope its not coming... yet at least)

Okay back to reading (see, this is why I waited till it was all posted )