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This song came on the radio as I was driving to work on Friday (blast from the past - thanks Sirius XM!) and has been stuck in my head ever since. I saw the challenge and decided it must have been stuck there for a reason. Hopefully the jumbled thoughts the song inspired translate effectively onto the written page. Enjoy! smile


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Hi Susan!
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I accept his engagement ring. I accept all these things with indifference
Lex will be so pleased. And Clark will be so happy.

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Are there words you don’t say? Words my actions have caused you to repress? Words that could hurt or help or heal?
Yeah, probably along the line of ‘Superman’.

Awww smile1 Nicely done!

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Nice story, I loved it


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This is great! Nicely done!


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Lois: All my life.
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Aww, very nice, emotional story. The thoughts and feelings that go through Lois. We can call her blind or stupid all we want, but really, she was an emotional mess during that time. And yes, she should have said NO to Lex, but she really wasn't able to process it all in a healthy manner.

Nice peek into her head!


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We’re not there yet. Something’s always wrong. But we can meet and begin to make amends. Because in the spaces, in between, something has always been right.

This was very touching. With Lois and Clark, no matter what's wrong, together they are just right!


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A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

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