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Let me know what you thought of my depressing short story!

Talia, I found this "depressing short story" quite by accident, and I'm glad I did. I think you've captured Clark's humanity by letting him lose it to Superman's role in defending Earth. I was a little surprised that there were other superheroes around who knew who Superman was but who never saw the man under the Suit. I understand how this might happen, but Clark is complicit in his own pain and alienation (accidental pun) in that he made his own bed and now he doesn't want to lie on it.

Quit whining, Superman! You want people to deal with you as if you're a flesh and blood person? Fine! Act like one, you super-ninnyhammer!

Okay, rant is done.

Very nice job, Talia. I hope to see more of your work soon.

Aw, thanks for your kind works. Sorry I didn't see this feedback for a long time.

I really want to write more Superman and/or Lois & Clark fanfic, but writing is haaaaard, whine!

That's definitely a good observation that Superman is complicit in his fate. After having gone down this path for so long, it might seem hard to go in a different direction.